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There in plain view a secret box That held all his letters Remants of your favorite flower One to like, well never At the bottom a plane ticket To a destination Undesired, frozen Alaska Total aberration Why hold onto dead love letters? Or his favorite flower An unused plane ticket crackled_ Why reminisce this hour So different this strange couple In flowers, expressions Held together by a secret box A unique possession Within that box sealed away; things Some bad these which they sling Forget their existence, buried Now that secret box cling Cling to every precious moment A love that lasted through Good times and bad, hard times and sad Divine love story true Inspired by: Laura Loo's Contest_Combination of Three Phrase_Poetry Written: January 02, 2016

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Date: 1/14/2016 11:19:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations Sara for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:02:00 PM
Hello Sara, congrats on your win.Love LINDA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2016 10:03:00 AM
PD, Thanks for stopping by with congrats..You are an encourager.. Sara
Date: 1/8/2016 4:48:00 AM
Thanks again Sara for your comments on my poem, Singers. I first write the poems then put tunes to them and sing them on 'open mic nights' which is what this poem is about. On youtube - Came here to connect, Louis Spence. Not my best performance however. I like the mystery of your In Plain View and its title. Keep on writing - it nourishes the soul.
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:19:00 AM
SARA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara! Beautifully expressed! Season's greetings !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2016 5:26:00 AM
The New Year is already speeding by but I hope that so far that it has been the Apple Of Your Eye..Thanks ...Sara
Date: 1/3/2016 12:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara! Beautifully expressed!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2016 5:24:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats..Sara
Date: 1/3/2016 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations and Happy New Year!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2016 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by with congrats..Sara
Date: 1/3/2016 10:35:00 AM
Sara, beautiful! It was exactly what I was looking for..Thank you for your participation in my contest...-luloo
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2016 5:22:00 AM
It was fun..Sara
Date: 1/2/2016 9:01:00 PM
Actually, this is great! Better if i will say...wish you luck in the contest Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2016 8:28:00 AM
White Sage, I like your online name..Your comment was uplifting..Thanks for dropping by.. Sara
Date: 1/2/2016 8:58:00 PM
What a beautiful poem.Love the "secret box" and loved these 2 lines "Cling to every precious moment A love that lasted through" And hey we both became Lifers on the same day!!!! Happy New Year!!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2016 8:26:00 AM
Arthur, I am uplifted by your comment for you told me something that impressed you in the lines..Thanks for dropping by.. Sara
Date: 1/2/2016 7:37:00 PM
a very interesting approach to this contest. WEll done. Sara. thanks for telling me lilacs represent first love. I had no idea. I got really lucky with that!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2016 8:25:00 AM
I thought about it then something just flowed..I enjoyed writing it..Thanks for the kind review..A factoid that is good to know about the Lilac..Sara
Date: 1/2/2016 3:33:00 PM
this is beautiful, Sara
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:34:00 PM
- Romantic and loving poems, dear Sara - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2016 2:45:00 PM
Anne Lise, Thanks for stopping by and taking time to read and comment..I hope that this is a great New Year for you.. Sara

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