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In Plain Sight

In the Scottish highlands, a storm's brewing, lightning flashes lighting up the night sky. And a liquid moon pools above the clouds, on a sultry summer's eve in July. Lock Ness shimmers like a silver shilling its surface rippling ever so slightly. And a submerged serpentine silhouette glides through the waters, almost contritely. Nessie seldom swims in the full moonlight, for darkness is its only proven friend. And instinctively, it hides in shadows, fearing its sighting might lead to its end. Under cover of the approaching storm, it feels safer upon this moonlit night. And it likes the accompanying rain so much that it risks swimming in plain sight. Living in the depths of the lock's waters, it sometimes yields to the light of the moon. And rises to play and splash in the waves, dreading that it'll have to go back soon. (Quatrain) Jan.7, 2018
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Congratulations, Emile on your great win.
Pinet Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Subimal, your comments of support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
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March 19, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Thanks Agnes, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Glad to see this as a solo First Place on the winners' list, Emile. I remember reading it before and wondered why it didn't place. Congrats! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 5:22 PM
So lovely your hard work was rewarded in this contest. I was sure I'd commented on this poem before:-( many congrats Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Neumann Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:45 AM
Great poem. Congratulations on your win. Many wishes, Kai
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thanks SKai, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Thanks so much Gregory, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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March 18, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your win!
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Sakshi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Emile,very well done with great imagery , I enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Thanks Eve, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Callus Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 2:58 PM
I am sure I had read this one before, Emile! It's lovely and the imagery is captivating. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:27 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - An old legend that still lives :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:09 AM
I love how you bring Ness to life in magical surroundings. Spectacular imagery. Congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:04 PM
You set the stage so wonderfully for the mysterious Nessie is this marvelous, descriptive poem, Emile. Excellent, as usual! GL in the contest :)
Pinet Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Lovely setting and imagery. Superb, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thank you Line, you have made an old man happy with your kind words my friend, Emile.
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January 7, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Lovely pen for Nessie! You are such a talented writer Emile, a joy to read. xomo :)
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thanks so much Maureen, you are one of my greatest fans and I am so appreciative of your loyalty my friend, Emile.
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