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In the Scottish highlands, a storm's brewing, lightning flashes lighting up the night sky. And a liquid moon pools above the clouds, on a sultry summer's eve in July. Lock Ness shimmers like a silver shilling its surface rippling ever so slightly. And a submerged serpentine silhouette glides through the waters, almost contritely. Nessie seldom swims in the full moonlight, for darkness is its only proven friend. And instinctively, it hides in shadows, fearing its sighting might lead to its end. Under cover of the approaching storm, it feels safer upon this moonlit night. And it likes the accompanying rain so much that it risks swimming in plain sight. Living in the depths of the lock's waters, it sometimes yields to the light of the moon. And rises to play and splash in the waves, dreading that it'll have to go back soon. (Quatrain) Jan.7, 2018

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Date: 3/21/2018 12:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Emile on your great win.
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Date: 3/21/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, your comments of support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2018 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Emile.
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Date: 3/19/2018 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2018 2:52:00 PM
Glad to see this as a solo First Place on the winners' list, Emile. I remember reading it before and wondered why it didn't place. Congrats! Sandra
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Date: 3/19/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 5:22:00 PM
So lovely your hard work was rewarded in this contest. I was sure I'd commented on this poem before:-( many congrats Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 3:45:00 AM
Great poem. Congratulations on your win. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/18/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks SKai, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 2:54:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Gregory, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Sakshi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2018 7:37:00 PM
Emile,very well done with great imagery , I enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Eve, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2018 2:58:00 PM
I am sure I had read this one before, Emile! It's lovely and the imagery is captivating. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/17/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2018 1:27:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - An old legend that still lives :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2018 9:09:00 AM
I love how you bring Ness to life in magical surroundings. Spectacular imagery. Congrats, Emile.
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2018 9:04:00 PM
You set the stage so wonderfully for the mysterious Nessie is this marvelous, descriptive poem, Emile. Excellent, as usual! GL in the contest :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/7/2018 10:14:00 PM
Lovely setting and imagery. Superb, Emile.
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Line, you have made an old man happy with your kind words my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/7/2018 9:36:00 PM
Lovely pen for Nessie! You are such a talented writer Emile, a joy to read. xomo :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen, you are one of my greatest fans and I am so appreciative of your loyalty my friend, Emile.
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