In Peril

. Earth Fragile In Danger Stop Pollution Now Sorry, I cant get the first line to center..

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James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2010 12:37:00 PM

If only they would listen Barbara, but i doubt it. Simple and to the point in this green Lanterne > good luck in the contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 8:47:00 PM

Hey rueben gave you a simpler command than the one I got! A period next to the margin plus space bar. That's all?? It was a good poem! LUv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2010 5:39:00 PM

Nice images with great expression. Good Luck

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2010 10:02:00 AM

I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Barbara. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Chuck Keys

Date: 5/21/2010 8:00:00 AM

short sweet and to the point. thank you, chuck

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/21/2010 6:43:00 AM

Barbara, a very powerful message delivered in such few words - Great job with this poem, God Bless, mj