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In Performance --- Haiku

in performance
whether I stay or leave -
the northern lights



NOTE: I didn't make it in time for the contest, but I wanted to write it nonetheless.

appreciationbeautifulbeautydeepnaturehaiku

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2021 6:38:00 PM

Love this ~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/9/2020 12:31:00 AM

Yes.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 3:49:00 PM

You're a minimalist tried and true, Maureen ... even in your commenting ... haha.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/28/2016 6:23:00 AM

A performance I would not wanna miss....you always wrote such lovely haikus. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2016 3:47:00 PM

Very nice, Tim. Getting back to Maths. They really say it in plural??

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/1/2016 12:39:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/27/2016 12:05:00 AM

Fantastic.....It would have placed well. Hugs, SuZ

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Suz!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/26/2016 10:01:00 PM

Very beautiful Haiku and the photo goes so well with it!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Arthur! Much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2016 11:38:00 AM

glorious 'ku with a strong pivot, tim... huggs

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 9:52:00 PM

Thanks 'Nette! Haiku is one of my favorite poetry forms.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/26/2016 11:34:00 AM

Lovely, dear...

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 9:46:00 PM

Why thank you Eileen ... happy to see your smiling face :)

J. Tudor

Date: 2/26/2016 10:45:00 AM

Stated with perfection. J.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:57:00 PM

Humbled, J. Thanks for stopping by.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/26/2016 9:50:00 AM

Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. It flows like the currents of life, with a realistic crispness. Emile.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:45:00 PM

A realistic crispness ... I like your choice of words here. Your meaningful feedback is always a delight and I'm never disappointed.