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in performance whether I stay or leave - the northern lights NOTE: I didn't make it in time for the contest, but I wanted to write it nonetheless.

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Date: 5/9/2020 12:31:00 AM
Yes.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 3:49:00 PM
You're a minimalist tried and true, Maureen ... even in your commenting ... haha.
Date: 9/28/2016 6:23:00 AM
A performance I would not wanna miss....you always wrote such lovely haikus. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/29/2016 3:47:00 PM
Very nice, Tim. Getting back to Maths. They really say it in plural??
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/1/2016 12:39:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/27/2016 12:05:00 AM
Fantastic.....It would have placed well. Hugs, SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Suz!
Date: 2/26/2016 10:01:00 PM
Very beautiful Haiku and the photo goes so well with it!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Arthur! Much appreciated.
Date: 2/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
glorious 'ku with a strong pivot, tim... huggs
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thanks 'Nette! Haiku is one of my favorite poetry forms.
Date: 2/26/2016 11:34:00 AM
Lovely, dear...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 9:46:00 PM
Why thank you Eileen ... happy to see your smiling face :)
Date: 2/26/2016 10:45:00 AM
Stated with perfection. J.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:57:00 PM
Humbled, J. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/26/2016 9:50:00 AM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. It flows like the currents of life, with a realistic crispness. Emile.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:45:00 PM
A realistic crispness ... I like your choice of words here. Your meaningful feedback is always a delight and I'm never disappointed.
Date: 2/26/2016 3:57:00 AM
Very beautiful Timothy - shame it was written too late for the contest :-( hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:44:00 PM
'Tis true ... but oh well. Happy to get inspiration regardless :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:30:00 PM
'Tis true ... but oh well. Happy to get inspiration regardless :)
Date: 2/26/2016 3:43:00 AM
Pity you failed to enter this one, Timothy:( It would have done well...I like it! // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thanks again Paul.