In Need of the Pill of Life

The pill of life, so in need of it am I It can even be seen as an alibi All for the sake of the lost humanity In my being, so deep like a cavity! The pill of life, surely to mend my heart Broken, it is now in need of a fresh start A reason to love and laugh Instead of choking with a cough A red pill it must be, found in the Heavens Given to those who relish God so much that he glistens A pill given to those who deserve it And who need its power bit by bit! A pill to cure me of my sinful nature A pill surely to open up an eternal adventure
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Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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February 26, 2013 at 2:02 PM
A G, a clever pill, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Many congratulations Anoucheka xx
Jones Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Beautiful writing dearest. I believe the red pill we all need and received was Christs blood spilled for us. It covers all our sinful natures if we ask.... blessings...
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February 1, 2013 at 7:52 AM
True :) Thks
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