William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tanka

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In Naught Out Wins Love

*Image of Harvest Mouse by KK News.

In Naught Out Wins Love

Prime blooms tryst dawns dew
midst steel spires vaunts vaults blue
save roots points of view
wrought grounds too firm to gauge through
yields sound replete for that shrew

2021 September 04

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L Milton Hankins September 4, 2021 at 1:23 PM Such a nice monorhyme, too, William. Enjoyed it. William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2021 at 2:14 PM Yeah, Milt, I thought to give that Tanka a booster, thanks, Aloha!