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In Nature's Surrender

"The sounds of Earth is the music of my soul." 


All woes and cares of the day I cast aside.
I'm sunken deep into the balcony seat.
Spring leaves continually rustle outside.
In nature's full surrender. What a swell treat!

Music to my ears, the whispers of the wind.
Nature's tranquility brings me peace of mind.
I wish I could joyously dance in the rain!
Raindrops rattle enthusiastic refrain.



Date written: 08/08/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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La France Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Edward, excellent Rispetto poem wonderfully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, and I love the image too, God Bless ~
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Creative way to go with this winning work. I do enjoy the sounds of a gentle rain and gentle breeze. Congratulations. Sara
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Rustling leaves and whispering winds. Enjoyed the vibrancy of your poem, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Vijay:-) I'm so glad you liked my very first Rispetto!
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