Constance La France Poet Free verse

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In My Yellow Dream

and in my dream, I left this realm and floated through a yellow portal door,
a world of shimmering glow, fields of golden rod swaying under an amber sky ;
fluttering yellow butterflies and pretty yellow bird melodies, and bumblebees buzzing,
I dwelled in this spiritual world of yellow until the morning dawn called me away.

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March 3, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/in my yellow dream
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All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 


For the contest, Unitied Colours: Yellow,
sponsor, Silent One, (Inspiration Image 2)

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:26 PM Broken Wings, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA Constance La France March 15, 2016 at 9:01 AM Linda, thanks for the congrats, the awesome and the love ~

James Inman March 9, 2016 at 8:43 AM Peaceful setting that could be expanded in to a beautiful tale. Constance La France March 9, 2016 at 9:49 PM James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !

Duke Beaufort March 6, 2016 at 3:06 PM A beautiful place to be, indeed. Constance La France March 6, 2016 at 6:52 PM Duke, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful !

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 12:02 AM Congratulations BW on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Constance La France March 6, 2016 at 12:08 AM Hans, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !

Brian Mcclain March 5, 2016 at 9:11 PM Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your win! Another finely colored poem--another enchanting world created! Cheers, Brian Constance La France March 5, 2016 at 11:55 PM Brian, thanks for visiting my yellow poem with congrats and the compliment !

Sathya Babu March 5, 2016 at 1:00 AM Many Congratulations on your WIN...... Constance La France March 5, 2016 at 3:16 PM Sathya, thanks so much for visiting with congratulations, appreciate !

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2016 at 10:57 PM BEAUTIFUL, Constance. And congratulations Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 10:59 PM Andrea, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations !

Connie Marcum Wong March 4, 2016 at 9:40 PM A very lovely entry and deserving win with this beauty Constance. Congratulations! #7 Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 10:43 PM Connie, thanks for visiting with the lovely, the beauty, congratulations and the 7 !!!!

Daniel Turner March 4, 2016 at 5:24 PM And a beautiful dream it is. Congratulations on your win, BW. Just checking back in. Peace my dear:) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 11:18 PM Daniel, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !

Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:05 PM Such a lovely yellow dream this is!n Congrats on your win, BW :) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 11:34 PM Laura, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the congrats !

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 4:14 PM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement, I knew it would place well. Thank you for your kindness on my poems, you are very sweet :)-luloo Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 11:35 PM Laura, thanks so much for the congrats and the nice comment !

M Asim Nehal March 4, 2016 at 3:09 PM Awesome poem............... Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 3:39 PM Asim, thanks for visiting with the awesome !

Sara Kendrick March 4, 2016 at 2:43 PM Great work..I enjoyed reading your yellow entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 3:45 PM Sara, thanks for your comment and congrats !

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2016 at 2:36 PM - Beautifully described in an yellow dream, B.W. - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 3:49 PM Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem with the lovely and congratulations !! Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2016 at 2:37 PM .....and congratulations :)

Sandra Haight March 4, 2016 at 2:31 PM Love your yellow dream, Broken Wings. I felt like I experienced it too with your lovely imagery. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 2:34 PM Sandra, thanks for the lovely comment, the congratulations and the hugs !!!

Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 2:17 PM It's getting to be a habit congratulating you congratulations B/W Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 2:30 PM Charlie, thanks so much for the congratulations, oh just keep them coming, please !

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 11:44 AM Broken Wings, you always carry such a soft flow with words so emotional. Very beautiful and perfect for the contest..Well written -luloo *smiles* Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:57 PM Laura, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment and smiles !

Winged Warrior March 3, 2016 at 10:59 PM Hey there's darkness in that lol...but I love it none the less...beautifully executed BW...might want to go and retire there...first I have to find some yellow clothing...:):):)^WW^ Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:33 AM WW, thanks for the beautiful and the comment, appreciate !

Charlie Smith March 3, 2016 at 9:29 PM Beautifully written B/W. Best wishes... Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:37 AM Charlie, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !

Laura Leiser March 3, 2016 at 8:09 PM An epic write in a few short, well written sentences, BW. Loved this :) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:44 AM Laura, thanks for visiting and the nice comment, appreciate !!!

Daniel Turner March 3, 2016 at 7:56 PM Another beautiful write, BW, Sensuous is the word I'm looking for. great write. Peace my friend:) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:48 AM Daniel, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment !!