Sharon Smith Poet Free verse

In My Prime

I stand
in my prime
indivisible
sure of my identity
but oblivious to my place in the world
you cannot change me into what you want me to be
but if you would accept me for the wonder that I already am
you may find yourself start to change into something more wonderful than us both

For SUZETTE PRIME contest – 11th November 2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 15, 2012 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on your top spot Sharon xx

Poet Destroyer A December 14, 2012 at 9:01 PM Sharon, , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... :-) PD

Debbie Guzzi December 14, 2012 at 6:30 PM Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love Debbie Guzzi December 14, 2012 at 6:31 PM so we didn't need to encorporate a philisophical quote ..I guess?

Richard Lamoureux December 14, 2012 at 1:18 PM Hi Sharon It seems we both interpreted the task in a similar way. Great job, I enjoyed your poem.

Michael J. Falotico November 18, 2012 at 3:30 PM Can't believe I'm the first to comment!! Well I love how you expressed your poetic pen here. Hugs Michael