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In My Perfect World...

I wake up happy everyday, Always have something nice to say; Live on a ranch with horses galore, And always have room for just one more; I can go riding whenever I want, The theme of my life is “Nonchalant”; I never have to worry about being late, Life is about me, everything else can wait; My house is always clean, maybe magically so, It leaves more time for snuggling with my beau; And I don’t hate going to my work, Cause my wonderful boss is never a jerk; I go home happy at the end of the day, Always have time to laugh and play; I love just being my husband’s wife, Man this sure would be the life!

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James Fraser

Date: 7/14/2010 11:41:00 AM

Sweet and delightful Tirzah with awesome images of the ranch. Many congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 8:43:00 PM

Congratulation, Tirzah on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 6:48:00 PM

Congrats Tirzah on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and special honor for u to so enjoy.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations Tirzah on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/30/2010 8:17:00 AM

excellent poem, love the ending, Harry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/30/2010 12:42:00 AM

This is an Excellent entry. I hope it takes top honors.

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2010 8:23:00 PM

LOVE IT!!!, ENJOYED THIS WRITE-SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/29/2010 2:56:00 PM

Ah, you had me going Tirzah. Until I got to the last line I thought "Gee, she leads the perfect life -- how lucky!" I would like to join you in this perfect world. Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2010 2:23:00 PM

thankxxx .. I was blown away .. am still holding on for dear life after reading his entry.. omg I hope the judging is based on creativity alone and not other reasons.. awesome Tirzah..thankxxx...

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2010 12:53:00 PM

You write for a lot of gals out there who wish for the same "perfect" life....perhaps there are a few lucky ones who have it all? Good luck, Tirzah!! Both in finding that perfection in life, and in the contest!! :) Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2010 12:24:00 PM

Excellent insight into Tirzah .. good luck in Carol's contest... this one with the horses and loving your job and hubby too.. my friend...its all good.. enjoyed another creative write... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii....