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In My Neighbourhood

Sighs of susurration sunder the silence ~ The neem tree swaying in the wind An old lady yapping like a non-stop chatterbox The roar of the road hero's motorcycle revving past And a radio playing romantic songs nearby An occasional vendor selling village vegetables The honking horn of the ice-cream man Children running by after a busy school day Household hens clucking to announce their presence Crickets croon in crazy chorus Then, there's the train whistling past thrice a day ~ Soulful sounds sweeten the symphony

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Date: 6/28/2024 5:37:00 PM
Sounds like a busy neighborhood, full of life, sights and sounds. I enjoyed my read. Great to see you again Joanna:)
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Date: 6/25/2024 8:16:00 PM
I can identify all these sounds. "And a radio playing romantic songs nearby An occasional vendor selling village vegetables The honking horn of the ice-cream man" These sights and sounds take me back to my childhood days. Now the radio no more plays romantic songs nor can we hear the honking horn of the ice cream vendor. Well done Joanna....
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Date: 6/25/2024 3:39:00 PM
Sounds like a typical neighborhood with lots of activity, Nicely described
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Date: 6/25/2024 1:30:00 PM
this is so cool!! Is it based on some new challenge I have not seen yet. GREAT job.
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Date: 6/25/2024 10:22:00 PM
This is not for any contest, Andrea:)

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