Vladislav Raven Poet Terza Rima

In My Heart Your Song Is Ever Singing - Valentine's Collection

(Valentine's Collection)

2.

Within my heart, you lie in sweet repose,
your gentle breathing tells me that you dream,
my Valentine, in dream you are my rose.

In blissful dreams, you are ever the theme,
that lights my heart with hopeful happiness,
as we do walk within the stars that gleam.

In peaceful thoughts together we progress,
our passion burns as fire across the sky,
love's desire we shall now come to express.

Now luna's comfort we share as we fly,
through God's timeless sea we both are winging
deep in our exultation, we do cry.

To love's temple all our love we're bringing,
in my heart, your love is ever singing.

13/01/2019

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Vladislav Raven January 17, 2019 at 6:16 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley January 13, 2019 at 3:02 PM My dear friend, you captured the essence of love’s song in your heart with exquisite emotion and delicate imagery. Dreamy romance filled with love: ‘my Valentine, in dream you are my rose’ - how gorgeous, Mike! The song in your heart does sing with a golden voice. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan Vladislav Raven January 13, 2019 at 6:16 PM Hi Susan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The heart is ever singing ad the rose is in full bloom. I am trying different forms for this collection, probably even some that are not suited to love. We shall see. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands January 13, 2019 at 2:48 PM Keep up this beautiful writing Mike! I love it . A favorite :) Vladislav Raven January 13, 2019 at 6:04 PM Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by, the comment and the fave on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Indeed, I shall try and keep up this writing. I have more to do in this collection, other forms to try. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2019 at 2:43 PM Your heart is full of love and longing Mike... and it writes such beautiful romantic verses! Vladislav Raven January 13, 2019 at 5:53 PM Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. A different form and the heart is still singing its love. My rose shall never wither Vijay, it shall always sing the love I feel inside. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Alexis Y. January 13, 2019 at 2:12 PM WoW! Mike, I must say it again, no one does love and romance quite like you. I found this to be dreamy, sensual and romantic! You penned a kind of love that most of us wish to experience. This is my kind of write. I enjoyed the read. Excellent job. If ratings were still in place this would havebgotten a big 7 from me:-) Alexis Vladislav Raven January 13, 2019 at 5:39 PM Hi Alexis, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The heart is ever singing. My rose is still in full bloom. I started my collection early for I want to try a few different forms. I enjoyed writing this one. have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX