Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Acrostic

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May 17, 2024

"A-form Only" Contest

Inspired by the Quote

Sponsor: Constance La France

In My Heart

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..." 
 E.E. Cummings

If you remember the ecstatic emotions we experienced, 
No unwavering obstacle could keep two of us apart!

My life and yours intertwined in a graceful harmony
You and I dreamed of a fascinating future together !

How we spent our days laughing and singing like free-spirited larks, 
Enjoying every moment of a blissful journey of our flight,
A truly passionate longing quivered in our trembling soul,
Rose blossoming in glorious splendour with no restraint,
The ambrosial exquisite fragrance we carried in our hearts.

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Constance La France May 30, 2024 at 7:15 AM Mala, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, Constance

Paula Goldsmith May 26, 2024 at 9:35 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Acrostic write/story again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........

I Am Anaya May 22, 2024 at 9:40 AM Malabika, such romance evokes a sense of the deep impact that love and romantic relationships can have on individuals. intense emotions and situations that deeply affect one’s life. You've explored love forever, the only thing that truly matters. "The ambrosial exquisite fragrance we carried in our hearts" Love it!

Krish Radhakrishna May 20, 2024 at 3:05 AM It is beautifully written!! Hope this scores a win in the contest!! Hope you are well! I have been on a long tour of Europe and back a few days ago! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 20, 2024 at 9:19 AM Thank you so much, Krish. Delighted to see your inspiring comment, and to know you are back from your tour. It had been a long tour, you said - which countries in Europe did you visit? I had been to Europe - England, France, Italy - long time ago. My daughter is inviting me to accompany her to Florence this November. I love visiting Europe because of the glorious artwork by artists like De Vinci, Michael Angelo, and others. I have to visit your page to find your new poems. Warmest wishes ~

Silent One May 18, 2024 at 7:50 AM A lovely acrostic and idea for this contest.. All the best.. Malabika Ray Choudhury May 18, 2024 at 6:01 PM Thank you, Dear Poet. Your visit and assurance with encouraging words, make me feel confident. Glad you liked the Acrostic. Best wishes ~

Vijay Pandit May 18, 2024 at 6:30 AM A lovely romantic poem, Mala. Much enjoyed this ode to heart.--Enjoying every moment of a blissful journey of our flight, A truly passionate longing quivered in our trembling soul---passion aptly flows through every line! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 18, 2024 at 5:58 PM Thank you, Dear Vijay, for your kind visit, and lovely comment. So glad you - a talented poet from our site - enjoyed lines from this poem! Best wishes to you - continue writing the stunning poems you always do!

Ink Empress May 18, 2024 at 12:11 AM Dear beautiful mala, what a brilliant acrostic this is! Exquisite diction and so heartfelt lines flowing so seamlessly throughout! Your words fit also the quote that youv chosen in this contest. I love how youv especially written “ My life and yours intertwined in a graceful harmony You and I dreamed of a fascinating future together !” every relationship starts with so many hopes and wishes but when it all becomes a distant memory it is painful.” Rose blossoming in full glory with no restraint” just love that ending! Brilliant! Best wishes for the contest! Im sure it will do well Malabika Ray Choudhury May 18, 2024 at 5:54 PM Dear Empress, My heart starts dancing when I find comments from you and few of my other friends! We all know how much our poems get influenced by our memories! We pour our heart when we grab a pen (laptop at present) reminiscing the happiness and sadness we experienced many years ago. I am so glad you liked this little piece of writing! Love and Hugs ~

Christina Bowring May 17, 2024 at 12:24 PM Dearest Mala, this is a wonderful, expressive acrostic poem. A very passionate love that lasts through the years. I love especially, ‘ free - spirited larks’ and the last two lines. ‘ ambrosial fragrance we carry in our hearts’ such a lovely poetic line. So enjoyed this delightful, romantic poem my dear, sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Wishing you a blessed weekend with hugs xx Malabika Ray Choudhury May 17, 2024 at 6:12 PM Dear Christina, I love the way you mention the lines or images that have touched you! You are one of those gifted poets I am learning every day from. I find this site a creative writing classroom - with so many talented individuals, each having their unique style. Hugs ~

Paula Goldsmith May 17, 2024 at 11:55 AM Your "In My Heart" is a wonderful Acrostic write/great ending. I enjoyed reading this one.  "Good Luck"  Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away......... Malabika Ray Choudhury May 17, 2024 at 6:08 PM Thank you, Dear Paula, for your encouragement and support. It is a learning journey - we learn by joining these contests. Constance is a great sponsor.