In My Fragile Little Ship

In my fragile little ship, I sail sail, 
In the tempestuous sea of life, vast, 
Studying the stagnant winds in detail, 
Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast.

Facing strong winds my ship starts from the clast, 
And trials of life - tides - ensue without fail;
Dodging life's pressures, to doldrums outlast, 
In my fragile little ship, I sail sail.

In moments when thunderstorms and harsh gale
Fill my life with gloom and leave me aghast, 
Steer ahead with cheer: my goal will entail, 
In the tempestuous sea of life, vast.

At times, harsh heartless words a shadow cast
Over peace; grief grips tight in life's travails;
Through unloving currents, I sail sail fast, 
Studying the stagnant winds in detail.

When hassles and tussles of life prevail, 
And gloomy events haunt me from the past, 
Amidst the dismal darkness I sail sail, 
Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast.

To flow with the rhythms of life, till the last, 
My ship is all set, though a little frail, 
The tides may be high or low in contrast;
Bouncing in and out of waves, I sail sail, 
In my fragile little ship...

Date: 03/04/2021
Submitted for: Life's Struggles - Any Form - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Rondeau Redouble Modified
Syllables: 10 syllables each line, except last line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 6:38 AM
I enjoyed reading about your ship as it sails through life with its problems and good times. Congrats on this great winner. Way to go. Thanks for the time spent at my page. Sara
Babcock Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Well penned. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:33 PM
congratulations on your well deserved win, sweetie.I don't think I saw a new one of yours that I have not seen yet!
La France Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Rondeau Redouble (Modified) poem, so skillfully penned, you always amaze me, well done _Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Constance thank you SO much for such an interesting contest, am happy you liked my poem. Doing a new form is truly exciting, and your contest helped me doing that... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 1:11 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 3:12 AM
Thank you so much dear Anne... Hugs to you too... ~ Ani
Seeker Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 3:12 AM
Thank you so much Unseeking Seeker. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 5:04 PM
Revisiting to say congratulations - well-deserved. I am very impressed the way you have used the unusual form. Love ~ Mala
Jayasankar Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 3:11 AM
Thank you so much dear Mala. Yours too, was a GREAT entry... Hugs ~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Wonderful! You have penned an excellent poem using a challenging form. Best wishes ~ Mala
Jayasankar Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 2:03 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Yes, this is truly a challenging form, that I haven't tried before. Have a blessed day dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Mcintosh Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 5:55 AM
This is remarkable! I love it. You did a wonderful job with the form... God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Jayasankar Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 2:02 AM
Thank you so much Regina.. for the visit and inspiring comment. Have a blessed day dear friend... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:56 AM
- Life's journey, dear Ani ... past and future ... sometimes it's blowing in the sails ... other times it's completely calm ... you have a wonderful poem here ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 2:00 AM
Yes, you are right .. Thank you so much for the visit and comment dear Anne... Hugs ~ Ani
Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Anitha my friend you rock!!! I have never tried or heard of this form/style of poetry, but applaud you for this gem you have created.! Love and blessings always, Jennifer.
Jayasankar Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 8:46 PM
Jenni thank you so much for the visit and sweet comment. Yes Jenni, this is a form I hadn't tried before, so I took this opportunity given by sponsor to try it. Hugs ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 10:01 AM
You are so good, Anitha, to figure out this difficult form and create an amazing poem. I should put mine up soon. I think you did better than I did. I took it so literally!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Andrea, thank you SO much for the visit, and KIND words. Yours will be the best, no doubt. Going to read yours now. Yes, it's a difficult form, I just LOVE to do forms I haven't tried before. Hugs ~ Ani
Brul Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 5:29 AM
A brilliant poem that evokes hope and tenacity..I love the two last lines, “ Bouncing in and out of waves, I sail sail, In my fragile little ship...” Best wishes in the contest!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Thank you so much JCB for the visit and comments. Have a lovely day... Hugs ~ Ani
Seeker Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:40 PM
Beautifully penned! Brilliant! Good luck for the contest!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Thank you so much unseeking seeker.. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
Fenn Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Hi Ani! What a beautiful, well penned poem about hope in adversity!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:21 AM
Thank you so much Jenni for the visit and comment.. God bless.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Lawrence Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:14 AM
Love this Ani ! Really emotional and beautiful. I could feel you sailing. "Amidst the dismal darkness I sail sail, Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast." Very powerful. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Susan :)
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Susanne, my friend, thank you so much for your lovely comment and wishes. Have a beautiful day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Hankins Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Such an excellent write. This is a difficult form (I know). I sense a clear winner here. I certainly hope you will write more in this style, because it was very effective. Good luck!!!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Thank you so much Milton. Yes, first time am trying this form. Surely, will try my best writing more. Have a great day. God bless.. ~ Ani
Buhagiar Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Seems a very sturdy ship really. Loved your poem and hope it will rate high.
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Thank you so much Victor for the visit n comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Michael Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Very good Anitha...All the ingredients are in the mix...Well done.
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:17 AM
Thank you so much Arturo, for the visit and comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
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