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In My Fragile Little Ship

In my fragile little ship, I sail sail, In the tempestuous sea of life, vast, Studying the stagnant winds in detail, Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast. Facing strong winds my ship starts from the clast, And trials of life - tides - ensue without fail; Dodging life's pressures, to doldrums outlast, In my fragile little ship, I sail sail. In moments when thunderstorms and harsh gale Fill my life with gloom and leave me aghast, Steer ahead with cheer: my goal will entail, In the tempestuous sea of life, vast. At times, harsh heartless words a shadow cast Over peace; grief grips tight in life's travails; Through unloving currents, I sail sail fast, Studying the stagnant winds in detail. When hassles and tussles of life prevail, And gloomy events haunt me from the past, Amidst the dismal darkness I sail sail, Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast. To flow with the rhythms of life, till the last, My ship is all set, though a little frail, The tides may be high or low in contrast; Bouncing in and out of waves, I sail sail, In my fragile little ship... Date: 03/04/2021 Submitted for: Life's Struggles - Any Form - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Rondeau Redouble Modified Syllables: 10 syllables each line, except last line

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Date: 4/1/2021 6:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading about your ship as it sails through life with its problems and good times. Congrats on this great winner. Way to go. Thanks for the time spent at my page. Sara
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Date: 3/17/2021 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Well penned. love phyl
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Date: 3/16/2021 4:33:00 PM
congratulations on your well deserved win, sweetie.I don't think I saw a new one of yours that I have not seen yet!
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Date: 3/10/2021 9:12:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Rondeau Redouble (Modified) poem, so skillfully penned, you always amaze me, well done _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/11/2021 2:23:00 AM
Constance thank you SO much for such an interesting contest, am happy you liked my poem. Doing a new form is truly exciting, and your contest helped me doing that... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/10/2021 1:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:12:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Anne... Hugs to you too... ~ Ani
Date: 3/9/2021 6:55:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Unseeking Seeker. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/9/2021 5:04:00 PM
Revisiting to say congratulations - well-deserved. I am very impressed the way you have used the unusual form. Love ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/10/2021 3:11:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Mala. Yours too, was a GREAT entry... Hugs ~ Ani
Date: 3/8/2021 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful! You have penned an excellent poem using a challenging form. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/9/2021 2:03:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Yes, this is truly a challenging form, that I haven't tried before. Have a blessed day dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/8/2021 5:55:00 AM
This is remarkable! I love it. You did a wonderful job with the form... God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/9/2021 2:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina.. for the visit and inspiring comment. Have a blessed day dear friend... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/8/2021 2:56:00 AM
- Life's journey, dear Ani ... past and future ... sometimes it's blowing in the sails ... other times it's completely calm ... you have a wonderful poem here ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/9/2021 2:00:00 AM
Yes, you are right .. Thank you so much for the visit and comment dear Anne... Hugs ~ Ani
Date: 3/6/2021 11:15:00 AM
Anitha my friend you rock!!! I have never tried or heard of this form/style of poetry, but applaud you for this gem you have created.! Love and blessings always, Jennifer.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/7/2021 8:46:00 PM
Jenni thank you so much for the visit and sweet comment. Yes Jenni, this is a form I hadn't tried before, so I took this opportunity given by sponsor to try it. Hugs ~ Ani
Date: 3/6/2021 10:01:00 AM
You are so good, Anitha, to figure out this difficult form and create an amazing poem. I should put mine up soon. I think you did better than I did. I took it so literally!
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Date: 3/7/2021 8:44:00 PM
Andrea, thank you SO much for the visit, and KIND words. Yours will be the best, no doubt. Going to read yours now. Yes, it's a difficult form, I just LOVE to do forms I haven't tried before. Hugs ~ Ani
Date: 3/6/2021 5:29:00 AM
A brilliant poem that evokes hope and tenacity..I love the two last lines, “ Bouncing in and out of waves, I sail sail, In my fragile little ship...” Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 3/7/2021 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much JCB for the visit and comments. Have a lovely day... Hugs ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 10:40:00 PM
Beautifully penned! Brilliant! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:22:00 AM
Thank you so much unseeking seeker.. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 6:32:00 PM
Hi Ani! What a beautiful, well penned poem about hope in adversity!
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Jenni for the visit and comment.. God bless.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 10:14:00 AM
Love this Ani ! Really emotional and beautiful. I could feel you sailing. "Amidst the dismal darkness I sail sail, Gliding up slowly with a lofty mast." Very powerful. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Susan :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/6/2021 2:20:00 AM
Susanne, my friend, thank you so much for your lovely comment and wishes. Have a beautiful day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 9:22:00 AM
Such an excellent write. This is a difficult form (I know). I sense a clear winner here. I certainly hope you will write more in this style, because it was very effective. Good luck!!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/6/2021 2:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Milton. Yes, first time am trying this form. Surely, will try my best writing more. Have a great day. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 9:16:00 AM
Seems a very sturdy ship really. Loved your poem and hope it will rate high.
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for the visit n comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/4/2021 8:35:00 AM
Very good Anitha...All the ingredients are in the mix...Well done.
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Arturo, for the visit and comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani

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