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In My Dreams Your Song Is Sung

(ABC - Rhymed)

As I now dream your bright beauty does shine,
before me an Angel of love divine.
Calm in my heart as your song it is sung,
deep within my heart love's bell it is rung.
Enveloping our love the moon shines bright,
forever you are beauty to my sight.
Give your precious love as our song does sing,
heartbeats alive with the passion we bring.
In my dreams our love does echo in the night,
Justifying the joy of love's bright light,
killing the deep sorrow my heart did feel,
lifting the dark cloud I tried to conceal.
Move my heart to the joy that love can give,
now in my soft heart your love ever live.
Opening my soul I now let you swim,
peace and joy now fill my heart to the brim.
Queen of my dream I now drown In Your eyes,
remember our song sung in Paradise.
Songs of a love sung in beauty supreme,
the beauty of you in every dream.
Under the moonlight our love it shall grow,
Venus of my heart you shall ever glow.
Wonder of the stars divine your beauty,
Ex-ploring desires shall be our duty.
You are the song my heart shall ever sing,
ZZZ's they shall sing within love's dreamy ring.

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Susan Ashley Date: 5/14/2019 5:56:00 PM Your poem’s song of love soars on lush dreamy wings, my dear friend. Such luscious romance, poetic beauty and imagery makes this piece so very swoon worthy, Mike. I delight in your passionate verse and how you deftly handled your poem’s x and z lines. Creative, artistic and clever. Your heart sings ever so beautifully in this fantastic write, my inspiring friend. Hope all is well. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Lemayian Leksat Date: 1/31/2019 10:02:00 AM Very creative and deep as always, can't wait for the verse. Great work Vladislav Raven ! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/31/2019 5:59:00 PM Hi Lemayian, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The rose is still singing in my heart. I am enjoying doing this Valentine's Collection. Have a wonderful Thursday....Mike.

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/17/2019 6:27:00 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/6/2019 1:35:00 PM Your songs of love will forever remain your forte, Mike! This is no exception. I like how you tackled this difficult form, and how you managed to circumvent the tricky letters 'X & Z'. Best regards, my friend. // paul Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/7/2019 3:27:00 PM Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked this ABC write Paul. The words still flow from the heart and long I hope they shall do. I so enjoy letting my heart sing. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Alexis Y. Date: 1/4/2019 8:13:00 AM WoW! Mike, Nobody writes love and romance like you. I enjoyed each and every line. It was filled with a deep and passionate love. I enjoy the ABC form and you did well. I heard your"love" song my friend. Well done and Happy New Year:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 11:28:00 AM Hi Alexis, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ABC piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am still on my heart's journey of love. I do so enjoy just letting the heart sing. I hope it will be long in doing so. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX. Have a wonderful 2019.

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/3/2019 2:31:00 AM What beautiful poetry, I Know this is much harder do write that it seems! Lovely! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 10:46:00 AM Hi Arthur, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ABC write, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. In my dreams. I always find love is the song. I am still on my journey and love shall ever be the song. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Constance La France Date: 1/1/2019 10:36:00 PM Mike, ABA is not an easy form but you did it brilliantly, a great write with many beautiful lines, well done ~ Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 10:30:00 AM Hi Constance, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ABC piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The heart is still singing love's joy as I keep on my journey. May love's song ever sing. Have a wonderful Friday. hugs....Mike. XX Have a wonderful 2019.

Silent One Date: 1/1/2019 8:01:00 AM What a brilliant ABC poem, not seen one of these for a while... So many great lines in this.. one of the best I have read.. Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 10:10:00 AM Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ADC write, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. Still letting the heart sing as it chooses to do. I do love the journey I find myself on. Have a wonderful 2019 my friend. Have a wonderful friday. your friend always....Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/31/2018 11:54:00 PM I LOVE this wonderful romantic ABC poem Mike! Beautifully composed so no notice is taken of transitions from one letter of the alphabet to the next. The flow is seamless! So well done! Cheers for the New Year! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 9:21:00 AM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ABC poem, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Love still sings from the heart Connie. I do enjoy the journey that I decided to travel in the world of poetry. Have a wonderful 2019. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Charlie Smith Date: 12/31/2018 3:45:00 PM That Z's a tough one, well done my friend, and Happy New Year... Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 1/4/2019 8:58:00 AM Hi Charlie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my ABC poem, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece my friend. Happy New Year Charlie. Yes, those Z's are hard, more easy I suppose when you are writing a dream. Have a wonderful friday. your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/31/2018 11:27:00 AM This is a lovely romantic poem..your words sing the praises of love..and your dream captures the essence of beauty. A sweet song you wrote my friend. Well done, Mike. Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 12/31/2018 12:36:00 PM Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. In my dreams love's song is ever sung, In my heart simple words shall ever flow. My journey of love ever continues. Have a wonderful New Year. Your friend always....Mike.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/31/2018 11:02:00 AM - Your words sings lovingly as always ... enjoy reading it, my dear friend Mike :) - On this last day of 2018 ... I wish you a wonderful and peaceful New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 12/31/2018 12:25:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. My heart is still singing that song of love, I think it always shall. Wishing you a wonderful New Year Anne-Lise. Hugs....Mike. XX

Robertina B. Date: 12/31/2018 10:33:00 AM Your creativity shines .. You have created a breathtaking masterpiece.. Really enjoyed this, my friend.. Blessings!! A Wonderful New Year to you!! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 12/31/2018 11:37:00 AM Hi Robertina, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. In my dreams love's song is ever sung. The journey shall ever be sung. Have a wonderful New Year. Hugs....Mike. XX