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In My Dreams Change

in my dreams (change) sail in tiny birch bark boats along the velvet dark streams listen to the chuckle of the invisible water as she faithfully travels toward the prayer of morning. we drum quietly to waken every living creature with our mothers heart beat the buds in the trees stir the deer lay down with their fawns life follows the canoes north. winter parts before us bows to the bringers of spring wanders off in unkempt fashion to sleep the living time away on mountain tops and circles at the ends of earth, so it goes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2018 1:30:00 PM
I really do especially love reading your work when you associate it closely with the culture and mysticism of the native Red Indian...and this is no exception. It is in plain fact - exceptional!! Beautifully crafted, Patricia. Your friend. :) john
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:14:00 PM
Oh so terribly tender. Our minds are so in sync. Every morning in my meditation I visualise theae very things you qrite about and then my day start with a terrific sense of atill purpose. So, I thank you for this image.
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:47:00 PM
This beautiful, Lne. I love the image of winter 'wandering off in unkempt fashion'. // Barry
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:57:00 PM
Lovely imagery. Delightful, Patricia. Happy New year to you and your loved ones!
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Date: 1/5/2018 9:10:00 AM
what a lovely descriptive opening stanza... Such amazing imagery in this poem.. well expressed Patricia..
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