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In My Dreams Change

in my dreams (change)

sail in tiny birch bark boats
along the velvet dark streams
listen to the chuckle
of the invisible water 
as she faithfully travels 
toward the prayer of morning.

we drum quietly to waken 
every living creature
with our mothers heart beat
the buds in the trees stir
the deer lay down with their fawns
life follows the canoes north.

winter parts before us
bows to the bringers of spring
wanders off in unkempt fashion
to sleep the living time away
on mountain tops and circles
at the ends of earth, so it goes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2018 1:30:00 PM
I really do especially love reading your work when you associate it closely with the culture and mysticism of the native Red Indian...and this is no exception. It is in plain fact - exceptional!! Beautifully crafted, Patricia. Your friend. :) john
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:14:00 PM
Oh so terribly tender. Our minds are so in sync. Every morning in my meditation I visualise theae very things you qrite about and then my day start with a terrific sense of atill purpose. So, I thank you for this image.
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:47:00 PM
This beautiful, Lne. I love the image of winter 'wandering off in unkempt fashion'. // Barry
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:57:00 PM
Lovely imagery. Delightful, Patricia. Happy New year to you and your loved ones!
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Date: 1/5/2018 9:10:00 AM
what a lovely descriptive opening stanza... Such amazing imagery in this poem.. well expressed Patricia..
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