In My Dreams

In my dreams

I’m still in my dreams
Walking along the streams
The way looks so dangerous
Its stories were so famous
But I’m still in my dreams

I don’t know where I’m going
Just know going to be ruined
I have not control on my mind
Summer is not so fine
But I’m still in my dreams

I saw a shadow looks terrible
Structure is not so visible
I make my steps towards shadow
My feet going to be swallow
But I’m still in my dreams



Weather becomes cool
Shadow is making me fool
I am a little afraid
I think my life has been paid
But I’m still in my dreams

I see a dead body
Where was nobody
This I’m not ready to face
I have to get out of this place
But I’m still in my dreams


By: Allishba Khalid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ajmal Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 4:22 AM
Such a beautiful a written poem, I really enjoyed reading it,yeah we don t have any control on our nightmares and at that time it all looks so real, anyway I m also from pakistan and want you to read my poems as well and tell me how they are
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March 17, 2016 at 1:02 AM
A.S, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 14, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Allishba, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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September 2, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Allishba, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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September 2, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Allishba, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 1, 2014 at 1:08 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Allishba - I choose your first sad written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Hi Allishba, what a deep powerful write this is! I wish you a very warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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