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In My Dreams

In my dreams I’m still in my dreams Walking along the streams The way looks so dangerous Its stories were so famous But I’m still in my dreams I don’t know where I’m going Just know going to be ruined I have not control on my mind Summer is not so fine But I’m still in my dreams I saw a shadow looks terrible Structure is not so visible I make my steps towards shadow My feet going to be swallow But I’m still in my dreams Weather becomes cool Shadow is making me fool I am a little afraid I think my life has been paid But I’m still in my dreams I see a dead body Where was nobody This I’m not ready to face I have to get out of this place But I’m still in my dreams By: Allishba Khalid

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/20/2017 4:22:00 AM

Such a beautiful a written poem, I really enjoyed reading it,yeah we don t have any control on our nightmares and at that time it all looks so real, anyway I m also from pakistan and want you to read my poems as well and tell me how they are

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 1:02:00 AM

A.S, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:41:00 PM

Allishba, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2014 6:28:00 PM

Allishba, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:21:00 AM

Allishba, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2014 1:08:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Allishba - I choose your first sad written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/31/2014 10:23:00 PM

Hi Allishba, what a deep powerful write this is! I wish you a very warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita