Valsa George Poet Triolet

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June-22- 2026

A Triolet to Make My Day Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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In My Dream- Triolet

In folds of night as wave he came
Entranced was I by his blue eyes
In a dream, came to see his dame
In folds of night as wave he came
Gently calling me by my name
My spirits to heaven’s did rise
In folds of night as wave he came
Entranced was I by his blue eyes

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Sam Kauffman July 10, 2026 at 12:33 PM Dearest Valsa, what a beautiful romantic reverie! There is such a sense of softness - of being cherished - moments of love coming in waves! Congratulations on your win, dear friend. Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2026 at 5:42 AM Congrats! Love that “he” CME as a wave!

Sara Kendrick July 2, 2026 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K.

Sotto Poet July 2, 2026 at 4:26 AM Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent Triolet poem, Valsa.

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2026 at 1:00 AM Nicely done, Valsa. I didn't get too many romantic ones so I appreciate this one's romantic tone. Congrats in my contest Valsa George July 2, 2026 at 4:37 AM Thanks dear Andrea for the placement given and your encouraging comment.

Joanna Daniel June 23, 2026 at 12:56 AM So lovely, Valsa:)

Joseph P. DiMino June 22, 2026 at 9:14 PM Very sweet, romantic. And original. If for contest, best of luck.

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2026 at 4:01 AM This one reads like a good contender to me, Valsa. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. These are not so easy to write but you made it seamless. Sara K.

Anne Winter June 22, 2026 at 3:41 AM Dear Valsa, a magical poem. I love the musical lyrics of your poem. Brilliantly written triolet. A Fave! Best, Anne

Ink Empress June 22, 2026 at 2:21 AM So lyrical and catchy sweet valsa, Its like a chorus of a song, so musical! I love the refrain and also the rhymes and cadence. “My spirits to heaven’s did rise” i felt extreme euphoria there! Beautifully expressed and delivered ~ best wishes. Sending you light always