Anitha Jayasankar Poet Free verse

In My Dream

In an island amidst the seamless seas, 
Gaping at the bucolic beauty of rippling rivulets, 
Listening to the gurgles of the whirling waterfall, 
Soothed by the serenity of the still silvery streams, 
Lulled to sleep by the rustle of pristine palms, 
I lay beside you in a perfect paradise.

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Smita Kulkarni July 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM Seems like a beautiful island Ani!! Congratulations!!

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2021 at 9:00 AM Just stopping by to say hi!! Let me see if you have any recent wins on the winner lists.

Christuraj Alex June 23, 2021 at 4:06 AM You are giving a live feeling to your poem. So beautiful.

Jennifer Proxenos June 16, 2021 at 7:42 AM Ani forgive me for not congratulating you earlier on this creatively packed poem. POTD you truly deserved, and the honor that goes with it. my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2021 at 2:28 PM So nice to see you got poem of the day with this one, sweetie.

Arturo Michael June 15, 2021 at 7:47 AM I thought it was outstanding. Congratulations Anitha Jayasankar on POTD.

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 12, 2021 at 1:18 PM WOW! Your words are taking me to a perfect paradise! Congratulations, Anitha, on your well-deserved POTD. A lovely piece of writing - a lot said in a few lines with rich images! To my faves. Love ~ Mala

Quoth Theraven June 11, 2021 at 5:15 PM Anitha, Lovely prose to raise in dream. The sights and sounds so well imagined. From the gurgling waterfall to the rustling pristine palms. I am swept away by your ideal paradise. -Richard

Brandy Nicole June 10, 2021 at 7:12 PM Such a beautiful dream, being "lulled to sleep, while listening to the whirling waterfall" It is *perfect paradise* indeed, laying beside the one you love, in such a moment. Congratulations Anitha, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:47 PM Thank you so much dear Brandy... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

L Milton Hankins June 10, 2021 at 7:10 PM Superb work, Anitha. I especially liked the alliteration at the ends of your lines. Well-written, and very deserving of POTD! Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:46 PM Thank you so much Milton... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Constance La France June 10, 2021 at 2:58 PM Ani, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 5:11 PM Thank you so much dear Constance... Have a lovely day.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May June 10, 2021 at 1:53 PM Lovely verse Anitha, Congrats on POTD Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 5:10 PM Thank you so much Joseph.. God bless.. ~ Ani

Angela Crabtree June 10, 2021 at 12:36 PM A beautiful poem, Anitha. Your words have painted a perfect picture of the dream. Hope you have a wonderful week :) ~Angie Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you so much dear Angela... You too have a wonderful week.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Eve Roper June 10, 2021 at 10:25 AM Beautiful poem, Anitha, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you so much dear Eve... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Alexis Y. June 10, 2021 at 10:00 AM Hi Anitha, I'm delighted to be coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM As I was typing the reply msg to dear Kim, it popped up in yours Alexis.. sorry dear... Thank you so much Alexis... Have a blessed day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 10:00 AM Thank you so much Kim.. Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Kim Merryman June 10, 2021 at 9:50 AM Beautiful and vivid imagery, Anitha! Congrats on your POTD! Blessings, Kim M Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 10:04 AM Thank you so much Kim... Have a blessed day... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Gershon Wolf June 10, 2021 at 9:45 AM Your alliterative talents have certainly added an extra dimension to this serene vision, Ani. Congrats on a richly-deserved, POTD. Peace and Tranquility, Gershon Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much Gershon.. Have a great day... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith June 10, 2021 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful and romantic write. A perfect paradise. Enjoy your win with blessings................. Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 9:07 AM Thank you so much Paula.. Have a blessed day... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Ken Rone June 10, 2021 at 6:52 AM This PODT is relatable to even those who have never seen palms. A universal love poem. Thank you Anitha. Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:40 AM Thank you so much Ken Rone... God bless.. ~ Ani

Arturo Michael June 10, 2021 at 6:51 AM A BIG ONE...Lovely poetry, with image and personality... Congratulations Anitha Jayasankar on POTD. Well done. Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:39 AM Thank you so much Arturo.. God bless... ~ Ani

Jan Allison June 10, 2021 at 6:37 AM a picture perfect poem, many congrats on POTD Ani:-) hugs Jan xx Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:06 AM Thank you so much dear Jan... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Daniel Turner June 10, 2021 at 6:21 AM This is quite a dream. Anitha. Congratulations on your POTD honors. Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 7:05 AM Thank you so much Daniel... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit June 10, 2021 at 5:38 AM Congrats Ani on poem of the day. Enjoyed your poem. Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 6:14 AM Thank you so much Vijayji... God bless... ~ Ani

Richard Lamoureux June 10, 2021 at 5:35 AM Back to congratulate you on POTD. ;0) Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 6:14 AM Thank you so much Richard... God bless.. ~ Ani

Heidi Sands June 10, 2021 at 5:28 AM Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :) Anitha Jayasankar June 10, 2021 at 6:13 AM Thank you so much Heidi.. God bless.. ~ Ani

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