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In My Dream

In an island amidst the seamless seas, 
Gaping at the bucolic beauty of rippling rivulets, 
Listening to the gurgles of the whirling waterfall, 
Soothed by the serenity of the still silvery streams, 
Lulled to sleep by the rustle of pristine palms, 
I lay beside you in a perfect paradise.

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/4/2021 12:30:00 PM

Seems like a beautiful island Ani!! Congratulations!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2021 9:00:00 AM

Just stopping by to say hi!! Let me see if you have any recent wins on the winner lists.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2021 4:06:00 AM

You are giving a live feeling to your poem. So beautiful.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/16/2021 7:42:00 AM

Ani forgive me for not congratulating you earlier on this creatively packed poem. POTD you truly deserved, and the honor that goes with it. my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2021 2:28:00 PM

So nice to see you got poem of the day with this one, sweetie.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/15/2021 7:47:00 AM

I thought it was outstanding. Congratulations Anitha Jayasankar on POTD.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/12/2021 1:18:00 PM

WOW! Your words are taking me to a perfect paradise! Congratulations, Anitha, on your well-deserved POTD. A lovely piece of writing - a lot said in a few lines with rich images! To my faves. Love ~ Mala

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/11/2021 5:15:00 PM

Anitha, Lovely prose to raise in dream. The sights and sounds so well imagined. From the gurgling waterfall to the rustling pristine palms. I am swept away by your ideal paradise. -Richard

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/10/2021 7:12:00 PM

Such a beautiful dream, being "lulled to sleep, while listening to the whirling waterfall" It is *perfect paradise* indeed, laying beside the one you love, in such a moment. Congratulations Anitha, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 7:47:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Brandy... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/10/2021 7:10:00 PM

Superb work, Anitha. I especially liked the alliteration at the ends of your lines. Well-written, and very deserving of POTD!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Milton... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2021 2:58:00 PM

Ani, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Constance... Have a lovely day.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 6/10/2021 1:53:00 PM

Lovely verse Anitha, Congrats on POTD

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 5:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph.. God bless.. ~ Ani

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/10/2021 12:36:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Anitha. Your words have painted a perfect picture of the dream. Hope you have a wonderful week :) ~Angie

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Angela... You too have a wonderful week.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Eve Roper

Date: 6/10/2021 10:25:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Anitha, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Eve... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/10/2021 10:00:00 AM

Hi Anitha, I'm delighted to be coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 10:06:00 AM

As I was typing the reply msg to dear Kim, it popped up in yours Alexis.. sorry dear... Thank you so much Alexis... Have a blessed day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim.. Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/10/2021 9:50:00 AM

Beautiful and vivid imagery, Anitha! Congrats on your POTD! Blessings, Kim M

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim... Have a blessed day... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2021 9:45:00 AM

Your alliterative talents have certainly added an extra dimension to this serene vision, Ani. Congrats on a richly-deserved, POTD. Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/10/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon.. Have a great day... ~ Ani