In My Dream

Was I really here before
this familiar place
that came in a dream
I came upon a wooden house
small yet cozy
nestled in a wooded area
surrounded by a fence
 a green grassy yard
a thick dense forest
beyond was a valley
with a canyon and waterfall
feelings of tranquilly engulfed
gentle breeze wafted
as I take in a breath of fresh air
I floated in my dream
this place I seem to know
maybe from another lifetime
locked deep within my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/14/2018 1:24:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, this is a beautiful poem.A beautiful day dream. Have a nice day my friend.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/16/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Darlene. Always nice to dream as long as it isn't a nightmare. lol. Have a nice weekend. love phyl
Date: 6/13/2018 4:20:00 PM
Lovely, Phyllis.
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Date: 6/16/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 6/13/2018 4:20:00 PM
I can relate Phyllis as it's happened to me when you go somewhere for the first time yet you know you have been there before and have seen it in a dream:-) hugs jan xx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/16/2018 3:19:00 PM
Happens often that you meet someone and feel like you have known them for years or meet them somewhere before yet you hadn't.
Date: 6/13/2018 2:54:00 PM
- Sounds like a wonderful place, with room for many beautiful dreams ... and just relaxing - In my next poem I will describe how the garden looks like on this beautiful place of your dreams - A beautiful poem, dear Phyllis - Good to see you, hope all is well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and yes will have to describe lots for my dreams are so vivid. lol. love phyl
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