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In Moonlit Dives -- Bite Size

Fireflies reel as autumn arrives Shimmering into kohl of night, Tiny plumes charm ...in moonlit dives To rollercoast until twilight-- To later fade, die from my sight!

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2024 7:39:00 AM

Beautiful ~ lovely imagery and word choices.

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/6/2024 7:27:00 PM

Imagery at its best!!!You have conveyed the fragility of life w=in this short but powerful gem. A masterpiece perfectly fitted in a tiny canvas toppling the rest. Congratulations.A fave for me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2024 3:21:00 PM

congrats with this awesome little poem, Nette.Love it.

David Drowley

Date: 7/29/2024 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations Nettie from a firefly fan!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/29/2024 2:23:00 AM

Lovely Nette! You are terrific poet!! Congrats on your win!!

Terry Miller

Date: 7/29/2024 1:20:00 AM

Wonderful poem, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/29/2024 1:09:00 AM

Kohl of night! amazing dear poet. congratulations. happy writing

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/28/2024 10:44:00 PM

Wonderful. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina

Silent One

Date: 6/23/2024 11:41:00 AM

Even in only a few lines, you created vivid imagery... Nicely done Nette..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/22/2024 7:58:00 PM

You always did have the magic touch when it comes to poetry and heart memories Nette. Its a real delight to read your words once again

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/22/2024 4:29:00 PM

Such a peaceful vision you have painted, Nette, my memory of your poetry rises like the dawn with each new post

Tom Woody

Date: 6/22/2024 12:44:00 PM

Brings back memories of my youth, when fireflies enchanted

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/22/2024 12:16:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. As a young child, we would put Fireflies in a jar. Now I wish we had Not done it. Adults gave us the jar... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Ink Empress

Date: 6/22/2024 10:20:00 AM

Beautifully rhymes and wordplay throughout this dear nette. I love especially kohl night. Kohl a color i love using too and i love also how youve written “ Fireflies reel as autumn arrives” so beautiful! What an opening! Pleasure reading this short but soulful write. Sending you light

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/22/2024 10:10:00 AM

Precious, indeed! Lovely piece, Nette.