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In Moonlit Dives -- Bite Size

Fireflies reel as autumn arrives
Shimmering into kohl of night,
Tiny plumes charm ...in moonlit dives
To rollercoast until twilight--

To later fade,   die from my sight!

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Line Gauthier Date: 8/13/2024 7:39:00 AM Beautiful ~ lovely imagery and word choices. Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 8/6/2024 7:27:00 PM Imagery at its best!!!You have conveyed the fragility of life w=in this short but powerful gem. A masterpiece perfectly fitted in a tiny canvas toppling the rest. Congratulations.A fave for me. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2024 3:21:00 PM congrats with this awesome little poem, Nette.Love it. Login to Reply

David Drowley Date: 7/29/2024 10:14:00 AM Congratulations Nettie from a firefly fan! Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 7/29/2024 2:23:00 AM Lovely Nette! You are terrific poet!! Congrats on your win!! Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 7/29/2024 1:20:00 AM Wonderful poem, congratulations Login to Reply

thriveni c mysore Date: 7/29/2024 1:09:00 AM Kohl of night! amazing dear poet. congratulations. happy writing Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/28/2024 10:44:00 PM Wonderful. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 6/23/2024 11:41:00 AM Even in only a few lines, you created vivid imagery... Nicely done Nette.. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/22/2024 7:58:00 PM You always did have the magic touch when it comes to poetry and heart memories Nette. Its a real delight to read your words once again Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 6/22/2024 4:29:00 PM Such a peaceful vision you have painted, Nette, my memory of your poetry rises like the dawn with each new post Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 6/22/2024 12:44:00 PM Brings back memories of my youth, when fireflies enchanted Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/22/2024 12:16:00 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. As a young child, we would put Fireflies in a jar. Now I wish we had Not done it. Adults gave us the jar... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 6/22/2024 10:20:00 AM Beautifully rhymes and wordplay throughout this dear nette. I love especially kohl night. Kohl a color i love using too and i love also how youve written “ Fireflies reel as autumn arrives” so beautiful! What an opening! Pleasure reading this short but soulful write. Sending you light Login to Reply

Jim Slaughter Date: 6/22/2024 10:10:00 AM Precious, indeed! Lovely piece, Nette. Login to Reply