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In depths of mind we despair chilled within the barren dark we look hard, inside out for answers to unknown questions but none are really there it's us that makes it disappear no wrongs that can be right alone we're left to fight thru it all, until we see some sort of light I believe in heart, in strength, in fellow man that there is more good than bad but only notice when we feel sad for us, for others, we love and love we do not passion,.not heat but a true held empathy where hands reach out to meet to greet, one another from that fall, the falters those endless feelings that won't wither when the winds change I reach out, others they reach too for there is love and there is heart waiting to share to care, to warm the chill and guide us from life's ill

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Date: 11/1/2019 6:09:00 AM
...sometimes. fairweathers are winsome lost feathers blowing romantic notions in the wind. It's the tethers and anchors you must recognise for true friends.
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Date: 11/1/2019 7:25:00 AM
Truth...a great read is "A Feather Floats"
Date: 10/17/2019 7:55:00 AM
This is wonderful TS, warm fuzzies xomo
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Date: 10/16/2019 4:41:00 AM
This has a very meaningful and beautiful message TS. It is a fave for me too! Very nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Congratulations on having it honored for POTW! : )
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Date: 10/14/2019 11:31:00 AM
Many congratulations on your POTD, it's lovely to see a new member with the honour TS, very well deserved:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2019 11:13:00 AM
It is rare that anyone is truly alone, even if they feel it deep in their bones. Sometimes depression feeds us darkness and we believe nothing will ever fill that void. Congrats on POTW. May all who search find the hand that is reaching out to them.
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:22:00 PM
"that there is more good than bad" It takes someone with a GOOD HEART to notice the Good. Instead of the Bad. You have such a wonderful heart. It is evident within these words. Congratulations TS Poetry, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/13/2019 6:55:00 PM
IS, congratulations on POTW with this wonderful write, you can tell it was written from your heart and soul !
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Date: 10/13/2019 10:42:00 AM
TS Poetry, I like the poem with the intriguing name. "for us, for others, we love and love we do not passion,.not heat but a true held empathy". This, truly the purest form of love and friendship told in your gifted write. Very nice to find on this Sunday morning. -Richard
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Date: 10/13/2019 9:54:00 AM
The beauty of your poem inspires my heart and uplifts my spirit, TS. Such s great choice for POTW. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with this deep and thoughtful piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:39:00 PM
Amazed T and amazing! Love reading you!;)
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thanks B
Date: 10/7/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hello TS Poetry, this is a Great poem!! i love it. My fav. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 10/7/2019 9:03:00 AM
Awesome poem! I love this. A favorite for me :)
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :))
Date: 10/7/2019 6:42:00 AM
What a lovely uplifting poem ts, especially the final stanza, adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Jan ??

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