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In Memory of My Distant Love

Pondering up on hidden thoughts I relax in the balcony, recollecting those crafted priceless moments whence you had cast a spell~was immersed in severe infatuation. Always lending me your broad shoulders,pampering me to rest my crown. When am cramping down due to menstruation, you'll indulge in all the household chores, cradling me to sleep. Cooking food and feeding each other with love & care. Sadly when I gesture, you stretch out your warm hands forward to console me. Angrily when I seethed ,calmingly you bore. Dawn to midnight showering me with infinite kisses, promoting my cheeks to blush in twilight. Fluttering thoughts of our laughters and fun,dousing in same passion, how nicely we appreciated each other. Missing silly fights concluding with tight wrapping cuddles; Rewinding our candle lit dinner and romantic duets, stepping on foot,pressing against your chest. Dissolving time by re-reading past conversations; Cocooning me as a child in your heart,you've travelled apart. I beseech you to come back soon,so that we could start off our life. Will tip toe you being your companion. 1-7-2020 Placed as Honourable Mention. Note: In loving memory ..poetry Contest. Sponsored by Regina Riddle.

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Date: 7/17/2020 4:28:00 PM
This is beautiful.
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/18/2020 7:11:00 AM
Thankyou sir.:-) Am glad you liked my work. Best wishes for your poems too. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa.
Date: 7/7/2020 1:18:00 PM
I love this heartwarming soothing muse that has both longing and comfort. Congratulations on your win Deepa. Much love :)
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Date: 7/8/2020 3:11:00 PM
Hello Aditi mam, Thanks a bunch for your kind reviews,support,motivation,appreciations,blessings,love etc.. always.I am glad you loved my work.:-)Stay well.Much love:-) Deepa
Date: 7/5/2020 3:42:00 PM
God bless you and I pray for your peace and comfort. Thank you for entering my contest and Sharing your gift with me.
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Date: 7/6/2020 4:06:00 AM
Hello Regina mam, Thanks a bunch for the lovely appreciation and blessings.I am glad to know that my poem won your heart.:-) Best wishes for you too.Keep inspiring.Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/3/2020 5:47:00 AM
He sounds wonderful; I am sure he is very much missed.
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Date: 7/3/2020 1:15:00 PM
Hello Caren mam, Thanks for stopping by and glancing at my works.:-) I cherish your valuable words of appreciation. Take care.Warmest regards ~Deepa

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