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The flower buds with hue, texture and complexion fill the vast meadows to bloom in a flood of nature's perfection . . . . even in quiet concealment, shadow, and shade sun reaches her fingers for the untrimmed to aide, and birds in temperate songs invade and vines clasp studs. The warm gold sun shining- holds possession of me from sunrise until the beauty is done with love for all I see . . . I hold it all in my heart in an endless infinite lease knowing that the hand of God created this peace, and this eternal beauty is just one piece 'till heaven is won. ___________________________ August 11, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/In Meadows of Green Copyright Protected, ID 19-1172-520-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Contest - A Summer Day Re-do Sponsor - Michelle Faulkner Second Place Rhyme pattern - ababccca dedefffd

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Date: 8/29/2019 5:58:00 PM
A gorgeous poem you have written Constance! It is so deserving of your second placement! I loved it! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:05:00 PM
Connie thanks for the compliment and the congratulations
Date: 8/29/2019 3:41:00 PM
I love this form and your words set it adrift--a wondrous blend Constance--my compliments to your win ~ Aloha William
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:04:00 PM
William thanks for the compliment and for the congratulations
Date: 8/29/2019 3:28:00 PM
Warm and lovely! Congratulations, Constance!
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Kim thanks for the compliment
Date: 8/29/2019 3:03:00 PM
That last line stunning, I loved all of it, congratulations on your placement in my contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Michelle thanks for an inspiring contest and for my placement
Date: 8/13/2019 5:19:00 PM
Truly a stupendous poem. Best wishes, talented poet. Panagiota
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Date: 8/14/2019 12:11:00 AM
Panagiota, oh I like that word stupendous, thanks~
Date: 8/11/2019 5:57:00 PM
great imagery all around, I can see it so clear. Reminds me of your flowers! Good luck in the contest dear heart :)-luloo
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Date: 8/14/2019 12:10:00 AM
Lu, thanks for visiting and for the compliment, appreciate ~

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