Afolabi Muideen Poet Ode

In Me

People come inside me to worship their lord
With different kinds of request from their lord
For what they asked is unanswerable
Because they are asking for the downfall of his truthful
Fellow, they come inside me to worship the
Lord, for their mind and soul is not in me
They asked something from him, but he won't answer
They blamed him for not answering
Some are callous to the extent that they even stole in me
People come inside me to ask for forgiveness of their sin
And said to their lord " I won't do it again"
Immediately they left, they started escalating their sin
For their sin would block their prayers
Their prayer can't be answered
I can see through their minds and eyes the catastrophe on their ways
For I am close to God, I can see through their hearts
For I often exchange words with him, I know why their prayers were not answered
But the lord did not give me the ability to speak
It has become a pain in my mind, for not being able to speak.


                        30/5/2015.

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Funom Makama June 8, 2015 at 3:52 AM This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!

Richard Lamoureux June 7, 2015 at 8:49 AM I thought you spoke most eloquently. If not for the Hypocrites the churches and temples would be mostly empty. Sadly in one way or another all of us fit this discription. Thankfully God is merciful.

Kp Nunez June 6, 2015 at 7:39 AM Your poetry speaks to the heart where the wall could not...this is nicely written, Afolabi. Kim

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2015 at 11:40 PM Interesting one. If wall could speak!!! Afolabi Muideen June 2, 2015 at 2:47 AM I believe a well can speak through His power, I've seen a hen howl and louder His name even egg, rock, and tree physically His name written on it and it's not artificial but natural; it happened in my area........thanks for stopped by to comment on my poem.

Constance La France May 31, 2015 at 5:54 PM Afolabi, your faith shines in this write and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou Afolabi Muideen June 2, 2015 at 2:30 AM Thanks a lot for your kindness it is really appreciated.

Joseph May May 30, 2015 at 11:31 AM The downfall of truth and divine law has become the norm ...very good write Afolabi Afolabi Muideen May 30, 2015 at 12:38 PM Thanks for your worm comment it is appreciated, some people are so desperate to the extent that their aim in the house of God is not good at all. That is why the house of God remonstrated so that they can change.