thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

In Marked Territory

Fragile, delicate, beautiful thus rare
Three thousand meters above sea
In marked territory, listening to
Gurgling downward flow of
Waters of the sacred hill
A precious bloom stays
in the shades of tall trees.

A three feet high plant
Shy of sunlight, 
Shy of plundering human hands
Shirui Lily, a pale pink bell-shaped
Flower that carries many tales
Shows rainbow colors 
Through Microscopic lens.

Snubbed for being
So very mild, a lily
Not seen elsewhere
Bows gently to tell 
Mother earth –
If I ever live 
I live only here.

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John Read November 27, 2024 at 7:50 AM Hi thriveni, thank God it's free from plundering human hands, we do seem to destroy everything we touch. thriveni c mysore November 28, 2024 at 2:15 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I agree with you-'We do seem to destroy everything we touch'-well said dear poet. I am grateful to you for your precious time, thank you.

Paul Callus November 26, 2024 at 7:20 AM Many times when I come back home from travels abroad I tell myself "this is where I belong" And this is what I imagine this plant to say if it could speak! Shirui Lily has beautiful flowers (hadn't heard of it before, but your poem tickled my curiosity and looked it up). ~ Regards // paul thriveni c mysore November 26, 2024 at 8:25 PM I am grateful to you for this kind & pleasant visit dear poet. 'to belong' is the pulse I intended too. You write beautifully. Thank you dear poet.

Eve Roper November 25, 2024 at 11:52 PM Love the imagery you've described. Your description has a feel of serene and beauty. Thank you for reading my work in the new book. Hugs eve thriveni c mysore November 26, 2024 at 8:20 PM Thank you for this pleasant visit dear poet. I am grateful to you for such kind words, makes my day. Thank you. Hugs & blessings.

Edward Ibeh November 24, 2024 at 9:32 PM Beautifully composed and poignant piece, Thriveni. I enjoyed it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest. thriveni c mysore November 24, 2024 at 9:58 PM Thank you dear poet. I am grateful to you for your contest and your precious time. Thank you for this day's happiness. Cheers & Blessings.

Joe Maverick November 16, 2024 at 11:50 PM You put a lot of thought and creativity in here Thrivini.' This is most apprieciative of the great Beauty of the Creators intention.' All blessings.) thriveni c mysore November 18, 2024 at 2:10 AM I am happy by your kind visit dear poet. Isn't it amazing to know that this pale flower 'Shirui Lily' shows rainbow colors when viewed through microscope? I wonder who recognized that first! Botony was rough on me at school, I always fumbled at those spellings.I am glad you liked this dear poet. I am grateful to you for your blessings.

Nette Onclaud November 12, 2024 at 10:57 AM I am mystified by the languid mood of this piece, trevi...yes, we do hold our own space because we belong just there...amazing! thriveni c mysore November 12, 2024 at 7:34 PM I am glad you liked this dear poet friend, thank you for your pleasant visit and kind words. Blessings & cheers.

David Crandall November 11, 2024 at 1:47 PM Very interesting Thriveni. I always google your plants and animals and learn something. Ever been to the Shirui Lily Festival? thriveni c mysore November 11, 2024 at 5:41 PM I am glad you found it interesting dear poet. No I haven't been to the festival..again celebrations sometimes go haywire forgetting the reason itself! I very much appreciate your love of knowledge dear poet, thank you very much. Blessings & cheers.

Ink Empress November 7, 2024 at 1:15 AM This is so beautiful, how descriptive and soulfully moving too! Unique take on the prompt , pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest thriveni c mysore November 7, 2024 at 6:12 AM I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet, your rich words brings me joy, thank you. Thank you for the blessings.

Valsa George November 6, 2024 at 7:46 PM The view from the hill is so lovely.... an array of flowers of different shades and sizes. A lovely entry for the contest. All the best Thriveni. thriveni c mysore November 7, 2024 at 6:09 AM dear friend, thank you for your precious time, sweet words and blessings. I am grateful to you for the support. Cheers.