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Edward Ibeh's This or That vol 28 Contest  10.28.24

           

The shadow of his flight swept across the ground. Always the vigilant hunter at twilight's time of day No swoosh heard from the hawk's feathered wings. This swift and silent predator never makes a sound when soaring through shrubs and trees after prey... lizards, snakes, small game and other furry things. His territory, the conservation lot next to my house, is marked with many dried and brittle skeletal bones and guarded from his perch high atop an ancient oak. A mated pair moved in soon after me and my spouse. She said he's a good neighbor and calls him Mr. Jones, who keeps our yard free of mice, a congenial bloke. One day the pair were flying together as if in a dance when I noticed another hawk had sights on moving in. To defend their territory, they gave it a raucous chase. The battle ended quickly once they took their stance. We also protect our home from intruders. We're linchpin, at keeping it safe because it's our chosen nesting place. I mark my territory by trimming the hedges and lawn, keeping watch over it with eyes as keen as the hawk. That mailbox bears my name proving this is my land. I own all of it where the boundary lines have been drawn. From one end to the other, I'll not surrender where I walk. Anyone who tries to take it will feel the wrath of my hand.

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Date: 11/25/2024 10:40:00 AM
Pretty amazing, Lin! I love the marriage of the hawk story to preserving your, our, territory! Nice transition! Sending you blessings of autumn joy! Happy Thanksgiving to you!
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Date: 11/25/2024 12:10:00 PM
Hi, Sam and thank you. The hawk family lives on a conservation lot next to my daughter's property in Florida. I've enjoyed watching them for years now.
Date: 11/24/2024 11:40:00 PM
It seems as if this all came firsthand knowledge, you put us all right there with you envisioning everything as it happens
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Date: 11/25/2024 12:08:00 PM
It was written from firsthand experience of watching these very things happen but not on my property. Astute of you to recognize that, Brian. Thank you.
Date: 11/24/2024 7:53:00 PM
Such a brilliant write, Lin. Stunning imagery! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
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Date: 11/25/2024 12:07:00 PM
Edward, I am so honored by having this poem on your winning list. Thanks, every so much.
Date: 10/28/2024 10:45:00 AM
A realistic poem on real estate possession. We all feel the same way.
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Date: 11/25/2024 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Jay.
Date: 10/28/2024 1:14:00 AM
My first read of the morning and I wasn't disappointed,early morning aerial images flashed into my head looking down on a Canadian wilderness. Best of luck in the contest Lin. Tom
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Date: 10/28/2024 1:25:00 AM
Good morning and thank you, Tom. I didn't know where to go with this theme and didn't want to think about a dog and a tree. lol
Date: 10/27/2024 11:35:00 PM
An authentic Lin Lane write! Best of luck for the contest
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, Seeker. I appreciate your comment. First smile of the morning. ;-)

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