in marked territory

One sign read
MINE FIELD
Follow the marked path

One sign read
MIND FIELD
Your path is unmarked

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Date: 10/25/2024 10:41:00 AM
Hello John, Let me first say that I didn't know whether to laugh or cry. This leads me to my thoughts that your few words show so much duality. Literal vs. Metaphorical, Guidance vs. Ambiguity, Wordplay vs. Homonyms, Brevity and Impact, and lastly, Thought and Consciousness. In other words, it is very impactful! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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John Lawless
Date: 10/25/2024 10:52:00 AM
Daniel, if I ever get a book together and publish it could I use this comment on the cover.....it'll be a best seller before it is even read.....
Date: 10/25/2024 10:33:00 AM
What a creative write. Love It... Have a blessed Autumn day/weekend.............
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John Lawless
Date: 10/25/2024 10:50:00 AM
it seems that when the mind is open all sorts of stuff rolls in. thanks for stopping to read, glad you liked it
Date: 10/25/2024 7:58:00 AM
One sign read MEIN FELD Yours for 100 Marks
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John Lawless
Date: 10/25/2024 10:48:00 AM
...a yen, a buck, or a pound....Oh Gawd he's quoting a musical....
Date: 10/25/2024 7:19:00 AM
Ominous signs. Do you, or don't you?
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John Lawless
Date: 10/25/2024 7:28:00 AM
in either case playing "follow the leader" is always a questionable approach
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