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In Man You Trust

You went to the doctor’s office for your regular checkup The results came back about that persistent hiccup ... which nearly scared you to death There wasn’t no good report, only very bad news No rose-colored health bouquet, just the lingering sick blues The doctor said you got six months to live, and before you checkout, which organs would you care to give That’s the reward sent to you, for putting your trust in man Now you’re standing at the edge of the grave, with the shovel in your hand You just joined the walking dead, those who believed everything a man said When will the bulb come on in your empty head, that God’s the only one who knows what time you will have go to your earthen bed Here’s one preacher’s advice to you: Don’t get the itch you can’t scratch, don’t get the sore that can’t be patched Don’t get the suffocating wheeze, don’t get the dreaded fretting disease If you do get a terrible ailment, and in man you put all of your trust You surely are gonna lament, as they prematurely nail your coffin shut

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/28/2017 3:16:00 PM
Hoping that this isn't for real, Freddie...I mean the dire diagnosis. Still a superb write by this kind and caring 'romantic warrior'. Thank you!:) Best wishes, keep well.......Mikki
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Date: 5/28/2017 1:17:00 PM
Direct and powerful Freddie :)
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Date: 5/28/2017 10:53:00 AM
Always impactful!
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