Home » Poems » Tim Ryerson » In Lust With You

In Lust With You

Never wanted a touch Never lusted so much Never shook to the core Never felt this before How I burn with your fire How I sweat with desire How I ache in your pain How I crave you in vain...

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 3:38:00 PM

Wow, can lead to the imagination, hot

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2013 2:06:00 AM

Very passionate piece, Tim...sizzling

Donna Golden

Date: 10/11/2009 8:15:00 AM

Tim, this sulty piece aptly describes the human struggle with desire. Nicely done. Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/29/2009 4:03:00 PM

awww just give up on women..I think I will on men (nod) just write my poetry, start a new book, start painting again..hug my cat! Light & Love mon cherie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/27/2009 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Catie - I have taken your advise and changed the title...I did not realize this could be taken as an insult to women. It was certainly never meant to be. Thanks again...Tim