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In Loving Memory of You

In memory of you and all the beauty I behold. I will listen to the laughter's and discern which one was yours I would play the music that I know you would wish to hear And dance on the same footsteps wearing your shoes As I float dancing with you just one more time And when we are done, I will hold your hand Pull you towards me one more time And see forever in your eyes And when tomorrow comes And it's my turn to dance again with you, I will flow you to the Milky Way Where all the stars will look upon us With coruscation envy 6/29/2020
Poetry Contest: In Loving Memory' Sponsored By: Regina Riddle

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Date: 8/17/2020 7:22:00 AM
Can't help but envy the man targeted by such love and affection! Wonderfully done!
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:42:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute Eve. Congratulations Eve... Hugs
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:31:00 AM
A loving tribute Eve. So beautifully written. Dancing along the Milky Way, the sky full of stars. Both of you, together. Congrats!
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Date: 7/9/2020 3:29:00 AM
A stunning tribute. Dancing with the stars when the time comes...
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:16:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Eve. Much love :)
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Friend! Every word in your poem is soothing like the tune of a pleasing music! Love, Mala
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Date: 7/6/2020 4:55:00 AM
Back to you with big congratulations dear Eve mam:-) Keep inspiring.:-)With love~Deepa
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Date: 7/5/2020 4:02:00 PM
I love the way this poem was woven..Very pleasing to the eyes. Congratulations dear Eve! A FAVE!!!
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Date: 7/5/2020 3:22:00 PM
Beautiful memory dear friend. Such a blessing to read. God bless you with many more high placements and congrats on this one.
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:35:00 AM
Your love for him flows from his shoes you wear when you are dancing to the journey the two of you take to the milky way. Poetic perfection. Excellent write Eve, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 7/3/2020 6:06:00 AM
I see you eventually meeting your love and dancing among the stars, my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2020 9:18:00 AM
A soothing and mystic write Eve. This is absolutely gorgeous. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/30/2020 7:56:00 AM
Beautifully written Eve! :)
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Date: 6/30/2020 7:46:00 AM
Hello Eve mam, I loved your poem very much.Infact each of the lines are so beautiful.I am gonna favourite this:-) Keep writing.Keep inspiring. With love~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/30/2020 4:00:00 AM
Lovely written by a lovely poetess...best wishes Eve...(((Hugs)))...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:44:00 PM
i was lost and you found me....you placed Love all around me....everyday you would astound me....inspiring joy to surround me....until beyond the day that they will ground me....that was so inspiring mrs roper....;)
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Date: 6/29/2020 11:24:00 AM
and when tomorrow comes and it's my turn to dance again with you, I will flow you to the Milky Way where all the stars will look upon us with coruscation envy... What a beautiful ending... Loved your poem.
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Date: 6/29/2020 9:49:00 AM
Eve, Such nice musical memories in loved one's shoes in this poem's dance. -Richard
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Date: 6/29/2020 7:21:00 AM
this is as beautiful as the memories you hold dear... one can see the love flowing through this piece from your heart... wonderful penning Eve... hugs
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:58:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Eve--your words dwell in love and memory of beloved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:12:00 AM
Beautiful memories Eve. Tom
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