In Loving Memory of You

In memory of you and all the beauty I behold. I will listen to the laughter's and discern which one was yours I would play the music that I know you would wish to hear And dance on the same footsteps wearing your shoes As I float dancing with you just one more time And when we are done, I will hold your hand Pull you towards me one more time And see forever in your eyes And when tomorrow comes And it's my turn to dance again with you, I will flow you to the Milky Way Where all the stars will look upon us With coruscation envy 6/29/2020
Poetry Contest: In Loving Memory' Sponsored By: Regina Riddle
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Shatry Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:22 AM
Can't help but envy the man targeted by such love and affection! Wonderfully done!
Tor Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:42 AM
What a wonderful tribute Eve. Congratulations Eve... Hugs
Neumann Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 3:29 AM
A stunning tribute. Dancing with the stars when the time comes...
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Eve. Much love :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations, Dear Friend! Every word in your poem is soothing like the tune of a pleasing music! Love, Mala
Deepa Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 4:55 AM
Back to you with big congratulations dear Eve mam:-) Keep inspiring.:-)With love~Deepa
Brul Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 4:02 PM
I love the way this poem was woven..Very pleasing to the eyes. Congratulations dear Eve! A FAVE!!!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful memory dear friend. Such a blessing to read. God bless you with many more high placements and congrats on this one.
Proxenos Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Your love for him flows from his shoes you wear when you are dancing to the journey the two of you take to the milky way. Poetic perfection. Excellent write Eve, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 6:06 AM
I see you eventually meeting your love and dancing among the stars, my friend.
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 9:18 AM
A soothing and mystic write Eve. This is absolutely gorgeous. Blessings and love :)
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Beautifully written Eve! :)
Deepa Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Hello Eve mam, I loved your poem very much.Infact each of the lines are so beautiful.I am gonna favourite this:-) Keep writing.Keep inspiring. With love~Deepa:-)
Warrior Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 4:00 AM
Lovely written by a lovely poetess...best wishes Eve...(((Hugs)))...^WW^ :o)
Boddie Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:44 PM
i was lost and you found me....you placed Love all around me....everyday you would astound me....inspiring joy to surround me....until beyond the day that they will ground me....that was so inspiring mrs roper....;)
One Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 11:24 AM
and when tomorrow comes and it's my turn to dance again with you, I will flow you to the Milky Way where all the stars will look upon us with coruscation envy... What a beautiful ending... Loved your poem.
Theraven Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Eve, Such nice musical memories in loved one's shoes in this poem's dance. -Richard
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 7:21 AM
this is as beautiful as the memories you hold dear... one can see the love flowing through this piece from your heart... wonderful penning Eve... hugs
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:58 AM
This is so beautiful, Eve--your words dwell in love and memory of beloved.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:12 AM
Beautiful memories Eve. Tom
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