In Love's Embrace

 
I have found paradise with my first love in his eyes his gentle touch O, I love to stroke his raven hair as he whispers I love you . . . and our fingers entwine and lips crush mine 'till we are soaring- higher, higher, higher our passion almost pain our bodies thirsty two hearts beating then we lay wrapped together . . . in love's embrace ________________________ November 12, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/in love's embrace Copyright Protected ID -11-1304-255-12 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France EoW (10) first love, November 12, 2020 Blog Challenge, Brian Strand
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November 13, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Very romantic lines Constance..
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November 13, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Silent, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 2:48 PM
A beautiful romantic scene, Constance!!
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November 13, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Newton, thanks for visiting with the beautiful _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 12:00 PM
And yet religion claims the power to unite two people! Aloha! Rico
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November 13, 2020 at 4:35 AM
Rico, thanks for visiting and commenting, yes, religion well Catholic is the only one I know would not like this poem _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Wow love this romantic piece Constance. I am such a romantic at heart. love phyl
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November 13, 2020 at 4:36 AM
Phyllis, thanks for the compliment, comment and visit _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Wow such a sensual poem dear Constance the emotion and romance leapt from every word. A wonderful read and a FAVE for me ~ thank you Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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November 13, 2020 at 4:36 AM
Ann, thank you for the compliment on my poem and the FAV -Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Very romantic and sensual, Constance, I really enjoyed this verse. Hugs, John
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November 13, 2020 at 4:37 AM
John, thank you for the visit, compliment and HUGS _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Romance expressed in simple way. Very much enjoyed. ~~
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November 13, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Victor, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance
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November 12, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Lovely poem, Constance.
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November 13, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Mark, thanks for visiting with the lovely _Constance
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