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In Love's Battlefield

in love's battlefield
two men wage war for the heart
          of the same woman


Date written: 10/19/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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La France Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Edward, this speaks a timeless battle, well done !
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Constance:-)
Horne Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:00 AM
yes, been there, done that - so much said in so few words
Ibeh Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thanks! I hope you got the girl, Jack:-)
Kiser Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Instant imagery you've penned; well done.
Ibeh Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, M.L.:-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 11:27 PM
I like this senryu, Edward. Well penned.
Ibeh Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Line:-)
Poetry Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 7:16 PM
A tangled web we weave
Ibeh Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Indeed! Thanks for dropping by, TS:-)
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