In Love With Your Love For Me

You walked into my life closing the exit door
You held my hand when she drove herself away from the earthly floor
You stood by me to set the cluttered things right
You jumped in joy seeing me win life's every challenging fight

You loved the curve on my lips
You loved the sweat on my cheeks
You loved the sweetness of my distinctive melody 
You loved the deep scars on my body

You throb in my heart
You are the dance of my pulse
You flow in my veins
You are the perfume of my breath

Live life under the shade of my love
Suck love from the juices of my life
Swim through the honey drops of my heavenly hugs
Grow old and live young in the garden of my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/19/2019 8:26:00 AM
Beautifully put!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/26/2019 11:39:00 PM
Thank you kenisha :)
Date: 1/9/2019 7:20:00 AM
A sweet poem of love and longing..lovely sentiments.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/12/2019 11:54:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 1/6/2019 3:59:00 PM
"grow old and live young" - that is so true, especially if you met your love when you were young as they always look that age no matter what age you are. A beautiful tribute my friend!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/8/2019 4:21:00 AM
Oh thank you so much :)
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