In Love With You

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When I first saw you were so graceful and lean,
I must confess those tight jeans made me scream.

But when I looked into your eyes as you looked back at me,
There was something within those deep blues that set me free.

Maybe it was the way you talked to me with that smile, 
It would make my heart dance and sing for a while.

When we eventually found love, you brought color into my life.
You are my best friend who eventually became my wife.

Living life with you has left a song in my heart.
I love all of you, for you are my best part.

Edward J Ebbs - October 22, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/26/2021 9:37:00 AM
What a lovely thought Edward - "living life with you has left a song in my heart." Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2021 2:26:00 PM
That’s so beautiful Edward and so worthy of your win in Eve’s contest… Belle
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:28:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your win Edward
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Date: 10/25/2021 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Edward
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Date: 10/24/2021 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Edward, this was a beautiful heartfelt poem from the heart. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/23/2021 6:05:00 AM
Hi Edward ….what a very sweet poem….I like it . Debx
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful tribute to your wife, Edward:-) It's very romantic. Best of luck for a win! Welcome back to Poetrysoup, dear poet!
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:20:00 PM
Tight jeans, blue eyes, and a great smile, you paint a wonderful picture Edward, overwhelming us mere mortal men, your poem has simplistic qualities, but relays a potent message of love, all the best for contest, cheers David
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