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In Love With An Artist

IN LOVE WITH AN A~R~T~I~S~T Bathing in the moonlight, Holding onto my heart, I inhale your breath ~Of purest delight ~ You entice my soul With wisdom and art I surrender my words ~Like A Love at first sight~ In dreams you capture ~My surreal sight~ As I inhale your breath ~of purest delight~ REDfiery ©2016

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James Swartz

Date: 11/8/2017 5:01:00 PM

This is another great piece. The flow is wonderful and very creative.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/6/2016 5:20:00 AM

Love the flow to this creative piece of art!!!!! An excellent read to wake up to.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/28/2016 1:37:00 AM

Magnificent, The first quatrain is a Rubai ( very much like omar khayyam) This is not a free verse. Is RedFieryVerse. Magnificent...

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/16/2016 4:47:00 PM

Oh so glad to be able to have an opportunity to read one of your poems again...this is amazing...

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/20/2016 3:37:00 PM

Sweet words - reminds me of a Celtic song. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/16/2016 7:42:00 AM

Fine , romantic work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2016 10:38:00 PM

Red Firey, you have the beauty that paints like no other. Of Pure Delight.... I wonder who? I wonder who? A perfect light and write, you the ARTIST... LINDA

Red Fiery
Date: 5/31/2016 4:20:00 AM

Linda, I wish it was meant for someone ... And I wish that there was someone... Hahaha.. A part of my daydreaming , you can say... How have you been my dearest..? I have missed you. I was quite down for few days.. Hugs ~Red~

Brandy Sewe

Date: 5/27/2016 2:30:00 AM

Great Write

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/25/2016 9:39:00 AM

I LOVE THE STRUCTURE, CREATIVITY AND MESSAGE IN THIS SUPERB POEM. Closing verses capture it all.. Adding to my fav list.. Thanks

Red Fiery
Date: 6/2/2016 1:38:00 AM

thank you Robert :) I always appreciate your kind visits...Cheers ~Red

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2016 9:40:00 AM

Oh! I love this one, Red!! Holding onto your heart as you inhale your breath of purest delight ... this is how it feels when sometimes we're captivated by the works of others! Full marks to you. ~ Hugs :) paul

Red Fiery
Date: 5/25/2016 1:14:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest:)))) This poem was written after midnight...that's the only time my brain functions( properly !!!LOL)..I appreciate your kind visits....:))))~Hugs~Red