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In Love With An Artist

IN LOVE WITH AN A~R~T~I~S~T

Bathing in the moonlight,
Holding onto my heart,
I inhale your breath
~Of purest delight ~

You entice my soul
With wisdom and art

I surrender my words
~Like A Love at first sight~

In dreams you capture
~My surreal sight~
As I inhale your breath
~of purest delight~

REDfiery ©2016

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2016

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James Swartz Date: 11/8/2017 5:01:00 PM This is another great piece. The flow is wonderful and very creative. Login to Reply

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/6/2016 5:20:00 AM Love the flow to this creative piece of art!!!!! An excellent read to wake up to. Login to Reply

Pashang Salehi Date: 7/28/2016 1:37:00 AM Magnificent, The first quatrain is a Rubai ( very much like omar khayyam) This is not a free verse. Is RedFieryVerse. Magnificent... Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 7/16/2016 4:47:00 PM Oh so glad to be able to have an opportunity to read one of your poems again...this is amazing... Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 6/20/2016 3:37:00 PM Sweet words - reminds me of a Celtic song. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 6/16/2016 7:42:00 AM Fine , romantic work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/30/2016 10:38:00 PM Red Firey, you have the beauty that paints like no other. Of Pure Delight.... I wonder who? I wonder who? A perfect light and write, you the ARTIST... LINDA Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/31/2016 4:20:00 AM Linda, I wish it was meant for someone ... And I wish that there was someone... Hahaha.. A part of my daydreaming , you can say... How have you been my dearest..? I have missed you. I was quite down for few days.. Hugs ~Red~

Brandy Sewe Date: 5/27/2016 2:30:00 AM Great Write Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 5/25/2016 9:39:00 AM I LOVE THE STRUCTURE, CREATIVITY AND MESSAGE IN THIS SUPERB POEM. Closing verses capture it all.. Adding to my fav list.. Thanks Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 6/2/2016 1:38:00 AM thank you Robert :) I always appreciate your kind visits...Cheers ~Red

Paul Callus Date: 5/24/2016 9:40:00 AM Oh! I love this one, Red!! Holding onto your heart as you inhale your breath of purest delight ... this is how it feels when sometimes we're captivated by the works of others! Full marks to you. ~ Hugs :) paul Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/25/2016 1:14:00 AM Thank you so much dearest:)))) This poem was written after midnight...that's the only time my brain functions( properly !!!LOL)..I appreciate your kind visits....:))))~Hugs~Red

Tim Smith Date: 5/22/2016 11:00:00 PM Very lovely Red Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/23/2016 9:25:00 PM Thank you dear:)

Charlie Smith Date: 5/22/2016 5:40:00 PM Sweet passions Ms. Red... Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/23/2016 9:26:00 PM Hi Charlie!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2016 1:21:00 PM - Romantic and beautiful, Red - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/23/2016 9:26:00 PM Thank you Anne:)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 5/22/2016 1:05:00 PM Beautifully painted red excellent pen wishing you a blessing of a week pal Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/23/2016 9:27:00 PM I already posted our new collaboration...thank you for co-writing with me ...

Holly Bohto Date: 5/22/2016 12:52:00 PM Liked this one. I'm partial to cutting down to the bone and still conveying lots of meaning in poetry. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/23/2016 9:27:00 PM Thank you:)