Red Fiery Poet Free verse

In Love With An Artist

IN LOVE WITH AN A~R~T~I~S~T

Bathing in the moonlight,
Holding onto my heart,
I inhale your breath
~Of purest delight ~

You entice my soul
With wisdom and art

I surrender my words
~Like A Love at first sight~

In dreams you capture
~My surreal sight~
As I inhale your breath
~of purest delight~

REDfiery ©2016

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James Swartz November 8, 2017 at 5:01 PM This is another great piece. The flow is wonderful and very creative.

Pace Ink-U-Script August 6, 2016 at 5:20 AM Love the flow to this creative piece of art!!!!! An excellent read to wake up to.

Pashang Salehi July 28, 2016 at 1:37 AM Magnificent, The first quatrain is a Rubai ( very much like omar khayyam) This is not a free verse. Is RedFieryVerse. Magnificent...

Harry Horsman July 16, 2016 at 4:47 PM Oh so glad to be able to have an opportunity to read one of your poems again...this is amazing...

Matthew Anish June 20, 2016 at 3:37 PM Sweet words - reminds me of a Celtic song. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Matthew Anish June 16, 2016 at 7:42 AM Fine , romantic work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A May 30, 2016 at 10:38 PM Red Firey, you have the beauty that paints like no other. Of Pure Delight.... I wonder who? I wonder who? A perfect light and write, you the ARTIST... LINDA Red Fiery May 31, 2016 at 4:20 AM Linda, I wish it was meant for someone ... And I wish that there was someone... Hahaha.. A part of my daydreaming , you can say... How have you been my dearest..? I have missed you. I was quite down for few days.. Hugs ~Red~

Brandy Sewe May 27, 2016 at 2:30 AM Great Write

Robert Lindley May 25, 2016 at 9:39 AM I LOVE THE STRUCTURE, CREATIVITY AND MESSAGE IN THIS SUPERB POEM. Closing verses capture it all.. Adding to my fav list.. Thanks Red Fiery June 2, 2016 at 1:38 AM thank you Robert :) I always appreciate your kind visits...Cheers ~Red

Paul Callus May 24, 2016 at 9:40 AM Oh! I love this one, Red!! Holding onto your heart as you inhale your breath of purest delight ... this is how it feels when sometimes we're captivated by the works of others! Full marks to you. ~ Hugs :) paul Red Fiery May 25, 2016 at 1:14 AM Thank you so much dearest:)))) This poem was written after midnight...that's the only time my brain functions( properly !!!LOL)..I appreciate your kind visits....:))))~Hugs~Red

Tim Smith May 22, 2016 at 11:00 PM Very lovely Red Red Fiery May 23, 2016 at 9:25 PM Thank you dear:)

Charlie Smith May 22, 2016 at 5:40 PM Sweet passions Ms. Red... Red Fiery May 23, 2016 at 9:26 PM Hi Charlie!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2016 at 1:21 PM - Romantic and beautiful, Red - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Red Fiery May 23, 2016 at 9:26 PM Thank you Anne:)

Liam Mcdaid May 22, 2016 at 1:05 PM Beautifully painted red excellent pen wishing you a blessing of a week pal Red Fiery May 23, 2016 at 9:27 PM I already posted our new collaboration...thank you for co-writing with me ...

Holly Bohto May 22, 2016 at 12:52 PM Liked this one. I'm partial to cutting down to the bone and still conveying lots of meaning in poetry. Red Fiery May 23, 2016 at 9:27 PM Thank you:)