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In Love With a Dream

To be in love with a dream___
An old dream of who I thought
You were, the preimagined
Image of the person gone

Left with the low tide of night__
A full moon night years ago
Just a hollow empty shell
Remains__who are you anyway?

Appears to be considerate__
But not really behind scene
Sarcastic, hurtful, loveless__
Wishing for full-moon return

Bringing the person back who
Disappeared many moons hence
Where is the first star of night
Come answer my wish for love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2014 4:32:00 PM
Sara What an emotional and heart tugging write. You expressed your inner longing and what your heart is searching for so nicely. Thanks for the great comment on my Bruised and Battered poem,
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Date: 5/29/2010 10:52:00 PM
Emotions expressed so well A stuff of Dreams
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Date: 5/29/2010 8:03:00 PM
A nice emotional poem on love
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:32:00 PM
Well welcome back sweet Sara and I see u brought back some fine poetry penned .. I luv this dream of yours.. very nice creative write.. hope u have a wonderful vacation.. I am still away until Tuesday ..then home again.. and back to reality until June is all then away again.. Summer is such fun.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:10:00 PM
truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
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Date: 5/29/2010 3:03:00 PM
WELCOME BACK SARA. NICE 2 C YOUR NAME AMONG US TODAY. ENJOYED AND LOVE THE WISH U HAVE GOING HERE. HAVE YOURSELF A WONDERFUL MEMORIAL DAY,,IRMA
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