In Love

to live a life of mystery, in love, both of us, searching. breathtaking, lovemaking, a mystery solved. to live a life as lovers, true lovers, seeking, finding rapturous pain! another mystery solved. procreation, now making babies. true love's precious rewards. husband and wife, finally, life's pleasures, a family! all life's mysteries resolved! 4/30/18 Free Verse on Love (new poems only) - Poetry Contest sponsored by Laura Loo

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/5/2018 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Mick on your win. A very cute poem.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:34:00 AM

Many thanks, Subimal, appreciated. Mick

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2018 9:42:00 PM

Very sweet, Mick. Congrats on your win.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:33:00 AM

Many thanks, Line, appreciated. Mick

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/3/2018 11:19:00 PM

Hi Mick, You have penned such a beautiful and tale. A healthy and caring family is what "love"is all about.Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:33:00 AM

Many thanks, Alexis, appreciated. Mick

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/3/2018 10:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement. A refreshing poem about love and its stages. Enjoyed.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:31:00 AM

Many thanks, Susan, appreciated. Mick

Lu Loo

Date: 5/3/2018 3:01:00 PM

such truth! There's no greater love than starting a family with that special someone. Beautifully expressed dear Mick..Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:31:00 AM

Many thanks, luloo, appreciated. Mick

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2018 5:04:00 PM

a lilting piece on love and a new baby, mick!..huggs

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/2/2018 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. Hugs Mick