In Love

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2 Hearts Melt Into 1 Love As The Night Becomes Their Dance Floor.............

That old lone star sky Is burning so bright As heavenly bodies spin 'round Those old torch songs All night long...... Our feet never touching... the ground Just for a moment As you're so close to me My heart feels the brush Of angel wings Holding you tight Caught up in the night In heaven....In Texas....In love There's not any words Or poetic verse Being spoken right now The glow on your face Says everything And our kiss is leaving no doubt The whole world is dancing As young lovers touch When I look in your eyes There's no one but us In the arms of my girl Out of this world In heaven....In Texas....In love Protected by copyright

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John Hamilton

Date: 5/11/2018 9:37:00 AM

Wonderful verses Chuck, nice refrain in heaven in Texas in love...so sentimental. Hey I wrote my first country song, tractors and all check it out please!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2018 8:53:00 PM

this is a real beauty. Oh to have a dance like this!!

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/29/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thanks Andrea! Dance Dance Dance!

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/25/2018 9:11:00 PM

I'm just smiling with this one :)

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/27/2018 10:09:00 AM

dear Akkina....Your smile is beautiful!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2018 11:15:00 AM

Excellent poem Chuck..adorned with amorous words, your lyrics dance in love!

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/27/2018 9:47:00 AM

My dear friend Vijay......My thanks to you is rounding third base and headed for home!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/25/2018 9:40:00 AM

Oh! I am just enthralled and in love with this Lyric, Chuck. Your rapture and love exudes from the beautiful rhythmic expression of your poem. Your last sparkling stanza especially, takes me up, up and away.. 'In heaven...In Texas....In love... and into my FAVS!! Warmest wishes, my friend..

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/27/2018 9:41:00 AM

My heart thanks you, Sweet Susan....your awesome poetic talent is second only to your sweetness!