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In Living Color

Green hills are all abloom, in living color,
For a rich, prismatic sun is going places!
Azure skies glow, with clouds of powder,
Until a velvet moon comes, in its phases.

For a rich, prismatic sun is going places,
Strewing smoky, ruby hues everywhere,
Until a velvet moon comes, in its phases,
At twilight, with the diamonds in her hair!

Strewing smoky, ruby hues everywhere,
Sun aids life on land, in air, and the sea.
At twilight, with the diamonds in her hair,
A creamy moon then glimmers so calmly.

Sun aids life on land, in air, and the sea,
Azure skies glow, with clouds of powder,
A creamy moon then glimmers so calmly,
Green hills are all abloom, in living color!
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Gorelick Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Stunning. As if mother nature is unfurling her finest most exquisite drapery before my eyes! Robert
Buehler Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Thank you very much for your delightful remarks, Robert. Evelyn :)
Horsman Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 7:02 PM
I'd have to agree with the comments below, Evelyn, Your poetry is so positive, and you bring so much colour into everyone's life.
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 8:27 PM
Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend. I enjoy nothing so much as writing poetry, because I love to make people smile. Best of wishes, Evelyn
Baker Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Eloquent imagery as usual, Evelyn. Your Pantoum is beautiful my friend. I enjoy reading it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation, my friend. Blessings. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Brilliant pantoum. Great imagery and beautiful hues. Would love to wee the velvet moon.
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Thank you so much for your valued thoughts. :)
Hankins Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 7:03 PM
A most beautiful Pantoum, Evelyn. My goodness, you do have a way with color and flowers! Simply lovely! I can see reading this to a lover on a beach somewhere. Now, all I need is the lover! Hey, we can find the beach.
Buehler Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 9:49 PM
Milton, your appreciation and enthusiasm, as always, is a delight! Thank you so much for the smiles. :)
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