In Living Color

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Green hills are all abloom, in living color, For a rich, prismatic sun is going places! Azure skies glow, with clouds of powder, Until a velvet moon comes, in its phases. For a rich, prismatic sun is going places, Strewing smoky, ruby hues everywhere, Until a velvet moon comes, in its phases, At twilight, with the diamonds in her hair! Strewing smoky, ruby hues everywhere, Sun aids life on land, in air, and the sea. At twilight, with the diamonds in her hair, A creamy moon then glimmers so calmly. Sun aids life on land, in air, and the sea, Azure skies glow, with clouds of powder, A creamy moon then glimmers so calmly, Green hills are all abloom, in living color!

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/27/2022 12:46:00 PM

Stunning. As if mother nature is unfurling her finest most exquisite drapery before my eyes! Robert

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/27/2022 4:58:00 PM

Thank you very much for your delightful remarks, Robert. Evelyn :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2022 7:02:00 PM

I'd have to agree with the comments below, Evelyn, Your poetry is so positive, and you bring so much colour into everyone's life.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2022 8:27:00 PM

Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend. I enjoy nothing so much as writing poetry, because I love to make people smile. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2022 2:34:00 PM

Eloquent imagery as usual, Evelyn. Your Pantoum is beautiful my friend. I enjoy reading it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2022 4:57:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation, my friend. Blessings. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2022 9:02:00 AM

Brilliant pantoum. Great imagery and beautiful hues. Would love to wee the velvet moon.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2022 11:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for your valued thoughts. :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/25/2022 7:03:00 PM

A most beautiful Pantoum, Evelyn. My goodness, you do have a way with color and flowers! Simply lovely! I can see reading this to a lover on a beach somewhere. Now, all I need is the lover! Hey, we can find the beach.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/25/2022 9:49:00 PM

Milton, your appreciation and enthusiasm, as always, is a delight! Thank you so much for the smiles. :)