Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

In Land of Cockaigne

Seductively she says  ~  there’s a place I know
Unspoiled by misery of dreaded human woe
Where perfumed winds of amour gently blow
As embers of doting night in moonlight glow
When blossoms of romance fantasies unfold
Titillating beat of yearnings passions behold.

Streets we traverse are paved in glittering gold
With matching motifs on homes ornately bold
Bestowing upon citizens gift of esoteric solace
Resembling kingdom utopian, idyllic and flawless
Exempt from mortal worries, luxuriating carefree
On paradisiacal beaches of turquoise blue sea.

On wings of her charm we roam a magical day
As signs of peace and prosperity lead the way
Where mythical gems glimmer cozy life of leisure
And sensual desires inflame eternal pleasure
Pulsing my heartbeats in rhythms of her glee
Strumming whispers of love she crooned to me.

When mystical fairy scintillates garden of bliss
The land of Cockaigne cheers for a starlit kiss
As two souls cuddle lovingly in heavenly zeal
Ablaze in ecstasy enchanting euphoric appeal
In zest of yellow primrose, scent of sacred rose--
Granting my dreams then discreetly she goes.

November 25, 2020
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 25 – Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: In Land of Cockaigne
Placed 1st: Your choice (45) contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George June 23, 2022 at 8:58 AM This is poetry at its best ! I feel I am lost in a magic land where the perfumed wind blows and where there is not even a trace of sorrow.... where beauty and romance align ! So Utopean....and enchanting. Into my FAVE.....

Edward Ibeh January 20, 2021 at 3:35 AM Nice to see you win 1st place again with this gem, Vijay:-) Congratulations! Vijay Pandit January 20, 2021 at 5:49 AM You come up with fantastic themes--inspiration is everything in many of these writes. Much appreciate, Edward. Many thanks.

Arturo Michael January 11, 2021 at 9:09 AM Wow...A lovely write here...full of poetry Vijay Pandit January 20, 2021 at 5:47 AM Thank you Arturo.

Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2020 at 8:18 AM Such a romantic! Love the lines: When mystical fairy scintillates garden of bliss The land of Cockaigne cheers for a starlit kiss! Sending friendly poetry kisses, roses onto the stage. Vijay Pandit December 10, 2020 at 9:27 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh December 2, 2020 at 4:19 AM Wow, Vijay, this is simply an exceptional write with strikingly vivid imagery throughout! One of your very best, for sure. Congrats on your top win in my contest! Vijay Pandit December 2, 2020 at 7:23 AM So very kind of you, Edward. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks for holding contests.

Linda Alice Fowler December 1, 2020 at 5:55 AM Very nicely done Vijay! You always enchant me with your poetry. Congratulations on the win! Linda Vijay Pandit December 1, 2020 at 6:44 AM Much appreciate Linda--many thanks.

Alexis Y. December 1, 2020 at 2:38 AM WoW! Vijay, You have described such a magical and breathtaking place. If I visited a place such as this, it would be hard to leave. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit December 1, 2020 at 6:43 AM Thank you Alexis--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole November 28, 2020 at 12:09 PM "Seductively she says ~ there’s a place I know" Already I am loving this, because she is aware of where she is taking you. Beyond dreamy moments of "enchanting ecstasy.. While "On wings of her charm we roam" This is so beautiful and romantic. Magical. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit November 30, 2020 at 5:57 AM Thank you Brandy--glad to read your comments, as always. You are always a source of cheer. Much appreciate.

Akkina Downing November 26, 2020 at 7:52 AM Now this is a breathtaking place I’d love to visit. Vijay, simply beautiful... Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 3:27 PM Thank you Akkina--much appreciate.

Angela Crabtree November 25, 2020 at 6:52 PM A beautiful love story :) Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:16 AM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose November 25, 2020 at 6:50 PM wow, your muse worked overtime to come up with this beauty. Winning wishes coming your way Vijay Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:16 AM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2020 at 11:11 AM - A wonderful place with your words, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:15 AM Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Silent One November 25, 2020 at 9:12 AM You wrote this so well, I think it will do well in the contest.. Great storytelling.. Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:15 AM Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar November 25, 2020 at 8:41 AM I am beginning to yearn for such a land. The imagery lends itself to a fabulous place that many would wish for. Splendid write as usual Vijay. No doubt about the outcome. ~~ Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:14 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham November 25, 2020 at 6:32 AM Love the imagery in this one Vijay, an enchanting verse. Good luck Tom Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:14 AM Thank you Tom--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael November 25, 2020 at 5:59 AM You dance through this one...Playing merrily... Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:13 AM Thank you Arturo--haven't seen your poems in a while. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy November 25, 2020 at 5:53 AM Simply GORGEOUS, Vijay--vividly descriptive and flowing. Janice Vijay Pandit November 26, 2020 at 5:13 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.