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In Lake' Ch - ("i Am Another Yourself")

Not so different you and I Not in our idiosyncrasy or synchronicity the journey begins and ends the same. Zygots and corpse separated by a blip in time, a blink of the eye, a minuscule moment. Its a September song that haunts me now so much began and ended in the fall of the year. It was such a fall and not free, for it haunts like a phantom limb. Its my heart, you see. Beginnings, births and goodbyes. I am another out of the ether traded for finite dust. .................... Title Mayan (translation in parentheses)

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Date: 9/24/2009 3:04:00 AM
Great writing and thank you so very much for your comments! Greatly appreciated.
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Date: 9/8/2009 8:08:00 AM
you capture a deep emotion here in juxtaposition to a dead civilization.time and emotion positioned with an imutable sorrow.loved it....o
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:51:00 PM
mystical poetry!...jim
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:47:00 PM
You are a creative, and artist with your words,....this is a wonderful example! Great poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:25:00 PM
nicely done,
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:07:00 PM
Beautifully flowing write, very expressive, excellent, witty, reflection of your wit. Sincerely Moses
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