Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

In Its Grip

She was irresistible
Lust had me in its grip.
Tempered though somewhat,
When she produced the whip.

"What is this I said,
What is this game you're playing."
"You'll know soon enough, said she
For you are for a flaying."

I couldn't make a run for it
I'd let her tie me to the bed,
As she began to crack the whip
My heart fair filled with dread.

But several lashes later
How could I have known,
I really rather liked it,
My 'interest' had grown.







Entry for
Sexy Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Lewis Raynes.
18/11/18. Placed 2nd.

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Gregory Richard Barden November 29, 2018 at 3:37 AM Very nicely done, Gary - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-) Gary Smith November 29, 2018 at 5:34 AM Thank you Gregory. :)

Eve Roper November 26, 2018 at 10:59 PM Gary, congratulations on your win... Nicely done Gary Smith November 27, 2018 at 5:09 AM Thank you Eve. :)

Michelle Faulkner November 26, 2018 at 1:30 PM Such an 'interesting' piece, congratulations on your win! Gary Smith November 26, 2018 at 1:50 PM Thank you Michelle. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 12:19 AM - Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith November 26, 2018 at 2:15 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 11:18 PM LOL Congrats on your podium finish, Gary. Love your poem. Gary Smith November 26, 2018 at 2:15 AM Thank you Line. :)

CayCay Godwin November 18, 2018 at 7:37 PM Oh-what to do with this? I mostly comment on poems, not possible 'facts' in them (exceptions exist.) I wonder if Ann Landers or Ms. Manners covered this situation? How would they advise me on: after reading this, can I still look him in the eye? I laughed reading his poem, but is it okay to laugh if this is sexy to him, is that rude? I want to share concern about his sitting ability, but may learn it hurts in a good way & how would I respond to that? Oh, Gary, what a good time I had .. CayCay Gary Smith November 19, 2018 at 2:07 AM Thank you CayCay, :)

Lindsay Laurie November 18, 2018 at 5:42 PM G'day Gary … crikey! Be careful, although it does sound like fun - thanks Gary - Lindsay Gary Smith November 18, 2018 at 5:52 PM Thank you Lindsay, a bit of a laugh. :)