In Its Grip

She was irresistible
Lust had me in its grip.
Tempered though somewhat,
When she produced the whip.

"What is this I said,
What is this game you're playing."
"You'll know soon enough, said she
For you are for a flaying."

I couldn't make a run for it
I'd let her tie me to the bed,
As she began to crack the whip
My heart fair filled with dread.

But several lashes later
How could I have known,
I really rather liked it,
My 'interest' had grown.







Entry for
Sexy Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Lewis Raynes.
18/11/18. Placed 2nd.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/29/2018 3:37:00 AM
Very nicely done, Gary - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/29/2018 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. :)
Date: 11/26/2018 10:59:00 PM
Gary, congratulations on your win... Nicely done
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/27/2018 5:09:00 AM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 11/26/2018 1:30:00 PM
Such an 'interesting' piece, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/26/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. :)
Date: 11/26/2018 12:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 2:15:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 11/25/2018 11:18:00 PM
LOL Congrats on your podium finish, Gary. Love your poem.
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Date: 11/26/2018 2:15:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 11/18/2018 7:37:00 PM
Oh-what to do with this? I mostly comment on poems, not possible 'facts' in them (exceptions exist.) I wonder if Ann Landers or Ms. Manners covered this situation? How would they advise me on: after reading this, can I still look him in the eye? I laughed reading his poem, but is it okay to laugh if this is sexy to him, is that rude? I want to share concern about his sitting ability, but may learn it hurts in a good way & how would I respond to that? Oh, Gary, what a good time I had .. CayCay
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Date: 11/19/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you CayCay, :)
Date: 11/18/2018 5:42:00 PM
G'day Gary … crikey! Be careful, although it does sound like fun - thanks Gary - Lindsay
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Date: 11/18/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay, a bit of a laugh. :)
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