In His Eyes

There is a struggle in his eyes
People sense he is wise 
He will cut unhealthy ties  
He will keep his eyes on the prize
It is no surprise
this man will rise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:43 AM
I would immediately said monorhyme for type as all of the lines rhyme. Not easy to do, and yet you have!
Wood Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Eyes on the prize! A fun mono-rhyme. Keep up the good work and welcome to the Soup!
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