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In His Eyes

There is a struggle in his eyes People sense he is wise He will cut unhealthy ties He will keep his eyes on the prize It is no surprise this man will rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/31/2019 9:43:00 AM
I would immediately said monorhyme for type as all of the lines rhyme. Not easy to do, and yet you have!
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Date: 10/29/2019 8:38:00 AM
Eyes on the prize! A fun mono-rhyme. Keep up the good work and welcome to the Soup!
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