James Fraser Poet Tanka

In Her Lonely Dark

She, naked to bare
reaching out to natures moon
both in lonely dark
dreaming of her tomorrows 
stares into freedoms unknown








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Audrey Haick April 17, 2011 at 1:35 PM I feel the serenity in this beautiful Tanka, James. There's always hope in tomorrow. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2011 at 11:02 PM I like the picture you painted here. Unusual but very nice.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2011 at 1:59 PM A sensuous revelation in your lines James.. potent luv.. enjoyed ..

Francine Roberts April 16, 2011 at 11:37 AM excellent tanka, you brought the emotions to life