Pandita Sietesantos Poet Free verse

In Her High Heels - She Walks

In her High Heels - She Walks 

On golden sunbeams she gracefully strides, 
elegant in her little black dress; like Audrey Hepburn,
she a star sparkling in sexy, black shiny stilettoes.
Stepping high on heels and high on love, she smiles  
anticipating breakfast fit for a goddess…at Tiffany’s.


06-03-2018

Contest:     She Walks
Sponsor:     Julia Ward
Placement:  1st

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Susan Gentry June 15, 2018 at 11:42 AM Congratulations on your top win! Love it! Pandita Sietesantos June 15, 2018 at 7:46 PM Hi Susan, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work. Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Faraz Ajmal June 15, 2018 at 10:00 AM This is a really beautiful poem and a joy to read, many congratulations on your well deserved win, good luck Pandita Sietesantos June 15, 2018 at 10:03 AM Hi Faraz, thank you so very much for stopping by and kindly complimenting my work. I truly appreciate your visit. Best regards. Pandita

Mike Gentile June 11, 2018 at 9:50 AM Congrats Pandita on your well deserved win xxoo Pandita Sietesantos June 11, 2018 at 9:56 AM Hi Mike, thank - thank you, I really appreciate you visiting and leaving your lovely congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita

Mick Talbot June 10, 2018 at 8:01 PM Beautiful, a win in my book too, congratulations Pandita! Mick Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 8:04 PM Hi Mick, great to hear from you! I appreciate your lovely, encouraging compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Eve Roper June 10, 2018 at 4:49 PM This is very beautiful a very well deserved win,, Hugs Eve Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 7:34 PM Hi Eve, I dearly appreciate your lovely ccompliments - thank you so very much, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita

Fauxcroft Wade June 10, 2018 at 4:18 PM Amazing piece of poetry in motion. Well deserved win. Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 7:21 PM Hi Faux, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work. Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2018 at 3:58 PM oh I loved this one, Pandita. Congrats on this honor. Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 7:12 PM Hi Andie, thank you so much for returning with your lovely complimentary words! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Line Gauthier June 10, 2018 at 2:47 PM Back with most deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 6:32 PM Thank you dear Line for returning with your kind congratulatory words! Thank you! Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham June 10, 2018 at 2:40 PM Big congratulations on your first place win Pandita. Tom Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 6:30 PM Hi Tom, thank you so much! I really appreciate your compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Julia Ward June 10, 2018 at 2:33 PM This poem is a perfect example of what I was looking for in my judging of the "She Walks" contest. As I know from my own poem, the subject matter is deceptively simple and even the short (five line) requirement is no help. The maintenance of interest is important and you achieved it. Well done for your top win, Pandita. Julia, :) Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 6:29 PM Hi Julia, what a lovely surprise! I am so thrilled that you selected this piece for your top placement! Thank you so very much! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2018 at 1:37 PM - Yes, an elegant and beautiful lady - (I prefer low heels :))) - Wonderful written, good luck in the contest Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 1:38 PM Thank - thank you, Anne-Lise - I really appreciate you visiting and leaving your sweet compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Harry Horsman June 6, 2018 at 5:11 AM Excellent entry for contest, love the poem, Pandita, and the touch of nostalgia. Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:13 AM Hi Harry, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work. I truly appreciate your visit. Yes, this one does pay tribute to a lovely legend! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2018 at 5:53 PM sweet one making me nostalgic for that old movie. Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:12 AM Hi Andie, I often enjoy watching Audrey's oldies! Thank you for your sweet support! Hugs. Pandita

Winged Warrior June 4, 2018 at 9:52 AM A very high tale of heels...enjoyed Pandita...best of luck my friend...love and light...^WW^ Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:05 AM Hi WW, hope you are doing well! Thank you so much for leaving your sweet message! Hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo June 4, 2018 at 9:35 AM Amen Pandita! It's hard NOT to relive the graces Audrey displayed in her all-too-brief sojourn here. I love the opening, "In golden sunbeams ..." For me, you subconsciously bless the Giver of all Graces: in His sunshine (SON shine) we stride in His power & love, like gods.TY Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:04 AM Hi Anil, she's inspirational! Thank you, dear friend for your always encouraging compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2018 at 8:34 AM This brought to mind many pleasant thoughts. Audrey was exquisite as is this lovely write. Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:02 AM What a legendary woman! Thank you so much for your uplifting compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley June 3, 2018 at 10:21 PM Oh Pandita, those sexy, black, shiny stilettos; the breathtaking bane of our existence... :)) A graceful and beautiful poem in perfect pitch with your high poetic standards, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2018 at 11:01 AM Hi Susan, I hope you are doing well! It's so good to hear from you - thank you for stopping by and leaving me your lovely complimentary words, my friend! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Daniel Turner June 3, 2018 at 8:42 PM I might be able to take her to MacDonald's. Lol She would be more my style if she took off her shoes and carried them:) Seriously, it is a lovely write, Pandita. I'll bet you own a pair of black shiny stilettos:) Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 9:24 PM :-) :-):-) my friend, after walking for any distance in stilettos, she would be glad to take them off and carry them- LOL. I do own a few pairs (different colors) of shiny stilettos that I reserve for special occasions! LOL. :-):-):-) Love and hugs. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2018 at 8:34 PM I like it, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM I am so glad you like this one, my friend - that means so much to me! Hugs. Pandita

Lyric Man June 3, 2018 at 8:31 PM You create a mesmerizing sight.. I want that breakfast! Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 9:01 PM Hehehehe - I'm sure it would be quite a delectable breakfast:-)! Thank you, Chance for visiting and leaving me your wonderful compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier June 3, 2018 at 5:36 PM Lovely Pandita. Well done. Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 5:59 PM Thank you my friend, Line, for the wonderful compliments. Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 3, 2018 at 3:20 PM A wonderful portray of elegance in a well penned verses! A joy to read your write dear Pandita. Stay blessed. Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 5:57 PM My dear Besma, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work. I truly appreciate your visit. Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Charlie Smith June 3, 2018 at 1:00 PM And why shouldn't she? Good one Pandita... Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 5:54 PM Hi Charlie, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments. Hugs and best regards. Pandita