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SWEET

- In Heaven's Pillows -

Two cute little angels
Blue beautiful eyes
To heaven they soar
The stars glow
One heart beat
One heart can burst

Quiet sleep
Loss and pain
Soft kisses
Nothing is forgotten
Two hearts beats
Two hearts can burst

The joy was great
The loss tremendously
A mom and dad
Without happiness
One last minute
Their hearts beats
but ... have burst












26.08.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Ajmal Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:33 AM
A very nice and beautiful write, I always love reading your poems and thanks alot for commenting on my poem, good luck
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 11:36 AM
- Many thanks Faraz, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 6:25 AM
A poignant write Anne...best wishes
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:16 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marie Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:09 AM
An unimaginable grief penned from your beautiful heart with love and care. Gorgeous writing Anne-Lise xo
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:25 AM
- Lynn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is a beautiful, yet sad write. There can be such beauty in sadness, especially when your words do flow. As always, your gentle style of writing takes this sadness to a new realm. Your heart sings through the words. Such a sad situation, very sad, made so special by your gentle style. Your special touch is on this peace. Has to be a fave. Hugs....MIke. XX
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 2:28 PM
- A wound in the heart that will never heal, Mike - It must feel like an eternal nightmare // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i am glad i decided to pay one more visit before i did shut down. Such a sad yet beautiful write Anne-Lise. Your gentle words sing and the beauty of the images does come. Your words are the pillow's in Heaven. You always seem to touch the right tone in your work Anne-Lise. This is a definite fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 2:29 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visit, a fave and lovely comment, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Very soft and sad, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 9:57 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Such a sad, poignant poem, Anne-Lise :( Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:11 AM
- Terribly sad, John :( - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 4:13 AM
Very sad and heart breaking write. Felt it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:58 AM
- Ravi, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 3:05 AM
Tragic for parents something that one doesn't get over for a long time. Still one comforting thought is that they're in a much more Ethereal place, Just lovely Anne-Lise, and the image is absolutely beautiful...Maria xxx
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:58 AM
- Many thanks dear Maria, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wood Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 9:43 PM
This is so terribly sad Anne-Lise! I love the cute little gif!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:57 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Dean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Oh Anne Lise, this heartbreaking but knowing they are angels, lifts the heart from its sorrow. So beautifully sad my friend. Made me think of my baby niece. That photo is so adorable... hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM
- Many thanks Akkina, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Heartbreaking!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:55 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:47 PM
This is a very deeply moving poem. Well written. Tragic.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:55 AM
- Janis, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Very sad, it pains me to even think of such an event, the poem expresses these emotions so well!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:53 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:07 PM
I can't imagine the pain of losing children of any age and this reminds me of my son's friends who died in 2014:-( hugs Jan x
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:57 PM
- A tragedy that will never be forgotten, Jan - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:58 PM
So sad, so cute and I agree with Vijay, about finding heaven!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:55 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Sad but real--happy that the angels found heaven--full of emotion, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:54 PM
- Many thanks Vijay, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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