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in gurgling rapids salmon jump ladders ~ grizzlies feasting Submitted on April 17, 2018, for contest HAIKU: FISH sponsored by MICK TALBOT

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Date: 6/7/2019 10:07:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Line!
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Date: 6/7/2019 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/18/2018 6:32:00 PM
YOurs is very cute, Line!! Maybe I will post mine soon. (Love the ladder part)
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I will be on the look out for yours.
Date: 4/18/2018 4:16:00 PM
Great, and realistic, haiku, Line! Janice
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/18/2018 2:41:00 PM
Circle of life...
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:06:00 PM
Yes. A very wise reflexion. Thank you, Pashang.
Date: 4/18/2018 7:15:00 AM
That image flashed up straight away, a grizzly fishing for salmon, great hakiu Line, good luck Tom
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Always appreciate your visits and comments. Line xx
Date: 4/18/2018 6:14:00 AM
You are the Mistress of Imagery! Nice visual!
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
LOL - thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated. Line xx
Date: 4/18/2018 2:35:00 AM
I also agree with what Carolyn has said below. Great imagery in this Haiku you've written Line.... Good luck in contest.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2018 3:11:00 PM
Love the energy in this awesome haiku, Line! Great imagery and a bit of a nature lesson as well. Best wishes in Mick's contest.
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn. Nothing anyone has not seen on National Geographic. LOL