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In Gurgling Rapids

in gurgling rapids
salmon jumping ladders
while grizzlies feast



AP: 3rd place 2022

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Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2019 at 10:07 PM

Lovely imagery, Line!

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 10:37 PM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2018 at 6:32 PM

YOurs is very cute, Line!! Maybe I will post mine soon. (Love the ladder part)

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 6:45 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I will be on the look out for yours.

Janice Canerdy

April 18, 2018 at 4:16 PM

Great, and realistic, haiku, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.

Pashang Salehi

April 18, 2018 at 2:41 PM

Circle of life...

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 4:06 PM

Yes. A very wise reflexion. Thank you, Pashang.

Tom Cunningham

April 18, 2018 at 7:15 AM

That image flashed up straight away, a grizzly fishing for salmon, great hakiu Line, good luck Tom

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 10:16 AM

Thanks, Tom. Always appreciate your visits and comments. Line xx

Caren Krutsinger

April 18, 2018 at 6:14 AM

You are the Mistress of Imagery! Nice visual!

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 10:16 AM

LOL - thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated. Line xx

Evelyn Knight

April 18, 2018 at 2:35 AM

I also agree with what Carolyn has said below. Great imagery in this Haiku you've written Line.... Good luck in contest.

Line Gauthier

April 18, 2018 at 10:16 AM

Thank you so much, Evelyn. Most appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2018 at 3:11 PM

Love the energy in this awesome haiku, Line! Great imagery and a bit of a nature lesson as well. Best wishes in Mick's contest.

Line Gauthier

April 17, 2018 at 3:26 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn. Nothing anyone has not seen on National Geographic. LOL

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