In Golden Hours

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To kickstart my Muse I thought I would try to write a Haiku a Day..

This is my second one today so ahead of the game,

Please wish me Luck that it continues.

golden leaves that dance citrine light through foliage fall floats like magic.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2021 9:08:00 PM

...as a side note. As beautiful as it is, here in Florida, one of the things I'll miss is the fall colors. It doesn't really seem to exist over here.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2021 7:27:00 AM

We never had it in Hawaii either. It is something to be missed.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2021 9:07:00 PM

I've never heard of the word "citrine" (reminds me of citrus), so thanks for improving my vocab. I'm a sucker for the color orange, whether golden or darker in shade, so this one instantly appeals to me. Your descriptive palette is great.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2021 7:26:00 AM

Lovely to read your comments today Timothy: I haven’t been checking in much lately. Also I don’t appear to be notified of comments in my email anymore.