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Suzanne Delaney

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To kickstart my Muse I thought I would try to write a Haiku a Day..

This is my second one today so ahead of the game,

Please wish me Luck that it continues.

In Golden Hours

golden leaves that dance
citrine light through foliage
fall floats like magic.

Copyright © Suzanne Delaney | Year Posted 2020

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March 22, 2021 at 9:08 PM

...as a side note. As beautiful as it is, here in Florida, one of the things I'll miss is the fall colors. It doesn't really seem to exist over here.

Suzanne Delaney

April 2, 2021 at 7:27 AM

We never had it in Hawaii either. It is something to be missed.

March 22, 2021 at 9:07 PM

I've never heard of the word "citrine" (reminds me of citrus), so thanks for improving my vocab. I'm a sucker for the color orange, whether golden or darker in shade, so this one instantly appeals to me. Your descriptive palette is great.

Suzanne Delaney

April 2, 2021 at 7:26 AM

Lovely to read your comments today Timothy: I haven’t been checking in much lately. Also I don’t appear to be notified of comments in my email anymore.

November 30, 2020 at 9:42 PM

Wow, I love it, especially the citrine light image and the idea of fall floating. Very magical.

Suzanne Delaney

December 1, 2020 at 5:00 AM

Thanks Carol....fall has become my favorite season of all.

November 16, 2020 at 1:57 PM

'Fall floats like magic' -- such a vivid line, and so memorable. Thanks, Suzanne. Autumn's Majesty, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

November 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM

Through your eyes, fall is certainly magical, so far your haiku experiment seems to be working!

Suzanne Delaney

November 15, 2020 at 6:36 PM

Michelle. Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment. SuZ

November 15, 2020 at 3:50 AM

I hope it continues as your muse seems inspired... Lovely imagery...

Suzanne Delaney

November 15, 2020 at 6:35 PM

Thanks SO: I appreciate your visits. SuZ

November 14, 2020 at 8:02 AM

Another gem from your pen Suz, keep em coming. Good luck. Tom

Suzanne Delaney

November 14, 2020 at 9:24 AM

Thanks Tom: Always so good to hear your encouraging words. Cheers, SuZ

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