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In Golden Glow

In golden glow did Luna rise
    Yet soon she blushed a crimson hue
 As shadows in her path did cross
     While Luna in her beauty grew
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 9/29/2015

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

January 26, 2016 at 9:39 PM

JOSEPH, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -

January 15, 2016 at 12:49 PM

This is exactly an example of what it means to 'show not tell'. Awesome! A 7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 14, 2016 at 4:14 AM

Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Joseph!

January 13, 2016 at 10:39 PM

Joseph, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**

January 15, 2016 at 10:37 AM

Thank you for my placement Skat.. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

November 16, 2015 at 5:55 PM

Just stopping by to check on any new poems but I don't see one. Have a great week, Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

October 10, 2015 at 1:04 PM

wow, how did I ever miss this one?? it's gorgeous, Joseph. Congrats too, on your win.

October 9, 2015 at 12:25 AM

Joseph, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

October 8, 2015 at 3:29 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 8, 2015 at 2:34 AM

Wonderful write Joseph! Congrats on superb win!

October 7, 2015 at 2:26 PM

Joseph, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

October 7, 2015 at 2:23 PM

very beautiful imagery Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

October 7, 2015 at 1:35 PM

I agree with Andrea...beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2015 at 7:30 PM

beautiful one!

Poet Destroyer A

September 30, 2015 at 11:51 PM

A lovely read my friend... the imagery is amazing... LINDA

September 30, 2015 at 3:38 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Moon struck..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

September 29, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

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